anonymous
  • anonymous
anyone want to revise my story..
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anonymous
  • anonymous
Go ahead, ill try
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sure :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Send it to me via message or right here :) What grade? and am i allowed to take in and add or just grammar? like can i change vocab and sentence structure or just simple revising??

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anonymous
  • anonymous
yup i need it via message cant post in here i send it via message to you. the problem is i cannot publish it because of the grammar error and the reason is english my 2nd language. >>>this story is for website but i get the word Substandard: The quality of this Hub does not live up to HubPages' standards. It may be empty or unfinished, poorly formatted (including having a disallowed capsule in the first full width position), contain broken links or videos, low quality photos or videos, use all capital letters or contain grammar or spelling mistakes that interfere with the readability of the Hub. These factors diminish the value of this Hub to our community.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Yup you can add something, my goal is to publish it without violation
anonymous
  • anonymous
i can check and see if its good
anonymous
  • anonymous
send it to you via message
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay
anonymous
  • anonymous
dont post the story here
anonymous
  • anonymous
i like it, i would make the biggning a little more longer and i would also not say to go to open study, i would say to go onto helping sites, example openstudy and yahoo answers.
anonymous
  • anonymous
it makes it look like your trying to advertise.
anonymous
  • anonymous
yeah they send me a message about substandard check my 1st reply my grammar and given me last chance to publish it
anonymous
  • anonymous
i edit the other word my u = you and i = I
anonymous
  • anonymous
i know
anonymous
  • anonymous
can you edit it and about OS too, what i mean about that is not Os this site = Openstudy with your classmate etc.
anonymous
  • anonymous
yah
anonymous
  • anonymous
my other story is going good they featured it on hub my sister help me do that but she go to work now and busy..But the one i send to you is my own story and grammar. http://kingkos.hubpages.com/
anonymous
  • anonymous
haha nice.
anonymous
  • anonymous
please some one revise my story
anonymous
  • anonymous
im working on it :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
wow thank you slahrichi godbless
anonymous
  • anonymous
Glad I can help :)

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