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kingkos

  • 2 years ago

anyone want to revise my story..

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  1. Slahrichi101
    • 2 years ago
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    Go ahead, ill try

  2. Smokahontas
    • 2 years ago
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    Sure :)

  3. Slahrichi101
    • 2 years ago
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    Send it to me via message or right here :) What grade? and am i allowed to take in and add or just grammar? like can i change vocab and sentence structure or just simple revising??

  4. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    yup i need it via message cant post in here i send it via message to you. the problem is i cannot publish it because of the grammar error and the reason is english my 2nd language. >>>this story is for website but i get the word Substandard: The quality of this Hub does not live up to HubPages' standards. It may be empty or unfinished, poorly formatted (including having a disallowed capsule in the first full width position), contain broken links or videos, low quality photos or videos, use all capital letters or contain grammar or spelling mistakes that interfere with the readability of the Hub. These factors diminish the value of this Hub to our community.

  5. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    Yup you can add something, my goal is to publish it without violation

  6. nightjay47
    • 2 years ago
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    i can check and see if its good

  7. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    send it to you via message

  8. nightjay47
    • 2 years ago
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    okay

  9. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    dont post the story here

  10. nightjay47
    • 2 years ago
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    i like it, i would make the biggning a little more longer and i would also not say to go to open study, i would say to go onto helping sites, example openstudy and yahoo answers.

  11. nightjay47
    • 2 years ago
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    it makes it look like your trying to advertise.

  12. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    yeah they send me a message about substandard check my 1st reply my grammar and given me last chance to publish it

  13. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    i edit the other word my u = you and i = I

  14. nightjay47
    • 2 years ago
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    i know

  15. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    can you edit it and about OS too, what i mean about that is not Os this site = Openstudy with your classmate etc.

  16. nightjay47
    • 2 years ago
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    yah

  17. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    my other story is going good they featured it on hub my sister help me do that but she go to work now and busy..But the one i send to you is my own story and grammar. http://kingkos.hubpages.com/

  18. nightjay47
    • 2 years ago
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    haha nice.

  19. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    please some one revise my story

  20. Slahrichi101
    • 2 years ago
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    im working on it :)

  21. kingkos
    • 2 years ago
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    wow thank you slahrichi godbless

  22. Slahrichi101
    • one year ago
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    Glad I can help :)

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