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julia_copen

  • one year ago

Help with an imagery paragraph?

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  1. missichatterbox
    • one year ago
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    What do you need help with?

  2. julia_copen
    • one year ago
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    I was walking on the rich wet sand of Hamoa Beach just when the sun was at its nadir. It's as if the colors and intensity of the light was enough to give me a feeling of tranquility. The air smelled like salt, I could practically taste it; it evoked ____________. I heard again the sounds I had missed, waves crashing against the rocks and the warm brush of wind as it pushed the water my way, rushing through my toes. I need to apply all five senses into a paragraph with five sentences. I am terrible in English though. Help me with the structure maybe? Like what should I apply and what should I remove?

  3. missichatterbox
    • one year ago
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    That's a good start! You have smell, sound, touch, and see but, you need taste. Find a taste and add it and you'll be good. (:

  4. julia_copen
    • one year ago
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    Any idea of how I should add taste? It's kind of weird since it is a beach I'm talking about.

  5. missichatterbox
    • one year ago
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    The air smelled of the ocean. The smell was so strong, I could practically tastes the salt on my tongue.

  6. missichatterbox
    • one year ago
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    take this out and add the other. The air smelled like salt, I could practically taste it; it evoked ____________.

  7. julia_copen
    • one year ago
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    I like that. Thanks.

  8. julia_copen
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    Should I add something for the ending?

  9. missichatterbox
    • one year ago
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    Can you check my music out?

  10. julia_copen
    • one year ago
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    Sure can.

  11. missichatterbox
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    https://soundcloud.com/missichatterbox

  12. missichatterbox
    • one year ago
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    Thanks! (:

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