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I need help with an imagery paragraph. Help?

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    What sort of imagery paragraph?

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    I have to write a five sentence paragraph using language that appeals to the five senses. I'm terrible in English. Can you look at what I do have and tell me how to improve it?

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    I'm not an English teacher or anything but I can try to help!

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    I was walking on the rich wet sand of Hamoa Beach just when the sun was at its nadir. It's as if the colors and intensity of the light was enough to give me a feeling of tranquility. The air smelled like salt, I could practically taste it; it evoked ____________. I heard again the sounds I had missed, waves crashing against the rocks and the warm brush of wind as it pushed the water my way, rushing through my toes. It's all jumbled up, I know. I need help with the structure and what I should apply or remove.

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    I was walking on the rich, wet sound of Hamoa Beach just when the sun was at its nadir. The colors and intensity of the light was enough to give me a feeling of tranquility.I heard the sounds I had missed, waves crashing against the rocks and the warm brush of wind as it pushed the water my way, rushing through my toes and the air smelling like salt. I could practically taste it. This is just what I think it should be but I would always get a second look if I was you. Hope this helped!

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