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happykiddo

  • 2 years ago

i have to write a admissions essay to nice highscool (my competition is feisty). The topic is why do you want to go to our school. I'm not to sure how to approach it. -i was thinking writing my dream and how their school will help me achieve it. **Any other recommendations on a good way to write this badboy**

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  1. AthenaWolf
    • 2 years ago
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    I think that's a wonderful idea. Be sure to elaborate on the unique advantages this school will give you in reaching that dream. Remember to triple-check the final product for spelling or grammar errors, and have an adult or two proofread it as well. Good luck on this!

  2. happykiddo
    • 2 years ago
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    Have you ever written an admissions essay to somewhere?

  3. AthenaWolf
    • 2 years ago
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    No, sorry. I'm just offering advice.

  4. happykiddo
    • 2 years ago
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    oh, well thanks for the moral support :D

  5. AthenaWolf
    • 2 years ago
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    You're welcome. Sorry that I have no experience with this. :/

  6. happykiddo
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    know anyone on the website that does

  7. AthenaWolf
    • 2 years ago
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    Try asking around the chat threads, there's usually tons of people floating around there. I don't really know too many people, I haven't been active on this site in about a month.

  8. happykiddo
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    thanks for help

  9. azolotor
    • 2 years ago
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    When I wrote mine for college I did something similar to Athena's suggestion, but as opposed to focusing on my dream I explained briefly what it was my dream was and how such and such an institution could help me achieve it. From there, I elaborated extensively on how that personal achievement would benefit the institution, community, and even global community a bit. For example, I went into physics and am becoming a research scientist so I spent a little time explaining how much that meant to me and why it meant so much to me, then I stated the ways in which it may benefit the university and make me an important contribution to a community at any level. Explain how your goal involves your self but how you want to use it for others. Hope this helps!

  10. AthenaWolf
    • 2 years ago
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    That is a great suggestion! I would never have thought of it that way.

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