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there is shine truly divine, you live in my heart my heart is shrine ♥ there is a breeze n i am freezed makes me feel your presence and i am pleased, there is a drift in my heart, drifting me to my sweetheart, there is a sadness but a sweet madness lonely ma world lonely ma life baby you aint here memories wet eyes i missing something amidst of everything, i am lagging i am swinging i feel i got everything baby if i aint got you i got nothing, i am awake i see your face i close ma eyes you embrace ♥ im called mad im called sad , im called ill , im called chad, knowing you, i am glad, i am glad your words heal the pain, your smile drives me insane .... some wishes say i'll be true, separation from you says i am bane, sometimes i feel happy sometimes i feel like bairn, baby i miss you this is the only pain, baby i miss you this is the only pain :'( :'(
this aint special indeed, but bruh this is freakin cute, you can sing it , who have you written this for ;) ;)
thanks man :)
this is really special and so sweet <3 i wonder who its for hehehe ;)
but yes its truly amazing everything you have written :) really nice :)
thanks a lot and you better know who it is for ;)
yes for a very special girl out there somewhere, who really deserves it :)
well her name is mentioned at the very top of the question near heart :D :D find it if you can ;)
hope you found that special girl's name who deserves it ;)
She must be pretty blessed to have a good man :)
i agree with you @geometrythebest, she got to be fortunate one
Very sweet poem, written from a very sweet guy to a very fortunate girl. (:
thanks , but that sweet girl left me cry dont know for how long :'(
hell no, shes gonna get back
all i can do is pray @itsmylife
Awe, I'm sorry to hear that. :o But I agree with @itsmylife she'll come back put a smile back on your face. (:
thanks, but it hurts bad :'(
man, you gotta hold, i've been waiting for 6 months i can feel it, relax
I FRIGGIN LOVE IT !!! YOU NEED TO POST MORE :) AND THE GIRL IS VERY LUCKY :)
@ghazi thats happened to me before its really hard to go through but we all will have to go through it once or twice in our lifetime, sorry to hear da doe
hey @Jenn777 thanks :) , i'll try to write all of my stuff and @dmezzullo bro actually my case is quite cute lol we break up every morning or day time and we are back again at night , every single day we break up and when we start missing like hell , we are back again lol ;) thanks :)
lol good, that happened with my ex gf lol we would break up alot bc she was wayyy to much fo me so i would break up with her and she would bug me and bug me to get back with her and she would cry and cry then she would get her mom involved we did da 7 or 8 times and then i jus said forget this.... and i am so much happier with the girl i am with now. @ghazi
Awwww!! Dz your heart :)
well it depends how you take it, may be she truly loved you and you took that as bug, but whatever i believe your happiness depends where there is mutual agreement, if you both were happy then you shouldnt have done that , but if you were not then i guess its kinda okay, but i cant see a girl cry , never and i am happy that you are happy now :)
yea i've been waiting for ma gurl from past 6 months :'( n shes hanging out with other guy , that hurts :'( lol
trust me it wasn't true love, she was only 12 she didn't know what true love was, she was way to immature and i can't believe i wasted everything i did with her.... but i think i might of found the one that i plan on staying with til death.
@itsmylife i am sorry to hear that, hope things work out best for you
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EajrbieKxwo Thats my song to her.
sorry to hear da bro @itsmylife
@dmezzullo love doesnt know age, and its very cute to be in love for the first time and she will remember this , her whole life , well its okay , if you found your love then i am sure you are lucky ;) remember its very hard to find true love but very easy to lose
thats very very very true @ghazi
thanks @ghazi thats why i keep reading your profile its like mine lol
this is what i believe @dmezzullo
sorry, that just freaks me out :( btw thanks :)
she might of thought it was true love at the time but it really wasn't, i realized i have screwed up in this current relationship but i have told her my mistakes i have apologized to her for em and she has forgiven me and isn't holding any grudges
i like your dedicated song dme its nice :) and its okay dont worry , life is full of fun, pain and this part of life is the cutest and the toughest too, you will remember all this :D enjoy it ;)
tyvm ya thats very true
*my heart is A shrine *there is a breeze and i am freezed *when i feel your precence i am pleased *there is a drift in my heart drifting me to my sweetheart *lonely ma world lonely ma life too many typos to correct -_- smh I'm not even gunna go on. almost every line is ridden with errors. good try but hopefully this will help u get better. use proper grammer. #nohate
@mikaa_toxica13 learn before judging , what you did is just crushing the theme n feel , better not to omit error if you aint capable of seeing beauty , hopefully that aint make you smart lol AND ITS NO HATE NOT NOHATE LOL
Before you correct someones grammar, get yours right. *presence. He was correct, you were not. He post a lovely poem and we don't need the grammar police with little typing errors. It was flowing from his heart and maybe it came out a little jumble. Good job ghazi! (:
pres·ence /ˈprezəns/ Noun The state or fact of existing, occurring, or being present in a place or thing. A person or thing that exists or is present in a place but is not seen: "the monks became aware of a strange presence". Synonyms attendance - appearance
@missichatterbox piece of knowledge , wow (:
Haha thanks! Just hate people being so mean and negative. Yes we post for feedback but, especially touchy subjects we want nice commentary. Not some grammar attacks..
its a hashtag. so there are no spaces. also, if u met a 17 year old person who thought 2 + 2 = 5 would u not want to be and let them live that way, or would u want to be rude and correct them ? its called brutal honesty. i dont care who u are, i give my honest answer. i have been writing songs for years now and no the common mistakes most people make, such as the ones u made. whether or not u take judgement well is entirely on u. either u can accept it and say "thank u, now i know how to make my workings better" or u can react with anger and a feeling of rejection. your choice. have a good day.
@mikaa_toxica13 if you cant adore literary art at least don't rip off the feelings lol alrite we gotch ya but that doesnt mean you start pointing out error , may be ther are mistakes but it aint supposed to be trashed by showing weakness, n fyi love got no language and @missichatterbox sometimes people are jealous probly b/c they don't own someone as loving lol NO HATE
You can't correct peoples grammar unless yours in adequate. You just said " thank u, now i know how to make my workings better" * Thank you. Now I know how to make my work better or I know how to better my grammar. Brutally honest comments are not wanted. You can be honest by why be brutal?
@missichatterbox i was not correcting him on the word presence. i made a mistake and spelled it wrong. yes i did. thank u for correcting me and making me smarer. also, i wish u a week in hell for being a smarta$$. i offer simple brutal honesty in a calm manner.
honesty cant be brutal @mikaa_toxica13
also brutal cant be calm
Stop correcting grammar! You don't even know how to speak. Foul language isn't wanted or necessary.
@itsmylife oh dear god, so many errors >.> also, yes it can be calm. i am not yelling or getting mad or even annoyed. @missichatterbox there really is no way to be nice about honesty. if a 250 lbs 12 year old asked u if u thought there were fat, how could u possibly tell them yes without hurting their feelings at least a little bit ? not possible. also, how was i correcting grammer on my last post ? i was not. i simply acknoweledged my mistake and thanked u for telling me. yes i used profanity, i use it on a regular basis, and the 12 year olds on here are already sneaking out with their bfs and making the beast with two backs. plus the profanity used on tv. so i dont think what i used will affect them at all.
@mikaa_toxica13 basically your jealous of this poem or song that you got no one to dedicate something like this to you lol now stop making fuss
really ? your going to resort to an insult so childish ? i could care less. im not the jealous type. i would rather see someone else happy, then to watch other people get jealous of my happiness. u are now too immature for me to waste my time on. i am done with this, have a good day living your ignroant lives.
Okay. If I'm understanding this right you're saying you have to be honest with people and hurt their feelings? If a little girl asks if she is fat, you can make it nice and say your bmi is higher than average but, if you want to change things i'm here to help! (: Also.. If people are stabbing people, you can stab people to because others are doing it? No. It's the same thing for profanity. Maybe our generation has exposed them to such inappropriate things that caused their bad behavior.
YOU'RE IGNORANT! Do NOT call me ignorant.
@mikaa_toxica13 stop it, a thought for you , HOLLOW CONTAINER SOUNDS MORE THAN THE FILLED ONE, now you better judge how much you know and how much noise your making out here m done too
poor poor child. i called @itsmylife ignorant. if u actually look, uu will see i responded to his post. not yours.
You actually said your * ignorant liveS.
alrite folks lets give a break , @missichatterbox futile to tell someone who cant hear , wrap it up
really misschatterbox ? your going to try and caps lock me to death or are u jus getting mad ? wow this is jus too easy. im done. now u both are ignorant. @missichatterbox actually i made a typo and said "ignroant". so i must correct u. un-capitalize the 's' and learn how to read. BYE ^_^
Okay. Bye itsmylife. (: I capitalized the S to show you directed it to multiple people.
wow, people, whilst writing this i had no idea what i was writing , i wrote randomly because i was missing someone very bad, aware of the fact that this section is for music i turned this poem in to music that i would upload here soon , by the way thanks for your concern , you mob operated my feelings lol hehe :) thanks @itsmylife thanks to @missichatterbox and thanks @mikaa_toxica13 :)