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Durbin 1 Brianna Durbin English 9 Susan Whipple 10 February, 2013 Romeo and Juliet Being in love can be fun, exciting, and dangerous. As Romeo and Juliet know, they took their lives for each other. But Romeo seems to fall for every girl he looks at. In all honesty, was Romeo really in love with Juliet or did he just like the drama that came with her? In Romeo and Juliet, Romeo thought he was in love with Rosalie. Then he thought he was in love with Juliet. How many girls were before them? Who knows? In my opinion Romeo falls in love with ever girl he lays his eyes on. But Juliet was the one who really gave him the attention he wanted. Romeo could have loved Juliet just to keep the drama in-between the families. With Rosalie there was not the drama there was with Juliet. With Juliet there was fighting and conflict between the two families. Maybe Romeo just liked that. Romeo stayed with Juliet for drama and excitement. He liked to have a girl beg for him and disobey their parents for him. It gave Romeo the feeling of being wanted and loved. His intentions were not to die over her, but to stay with her. He thought he loved her, when really he loved the drama that came with her. If there was no drama Romeo would seek it out and become a part in it somehow. Durbin 2 He died for her to carry on the drama. Since he dies the families can blame each other saying that they are at fault for their children’s deaths. If he would have lived he would have realized that she was still alive and would have left her eventually when the families stopped arguing. It was hard back then to find true love. To find a person that would love you for you, not for your family drama. Being in love can be fun, exciting, and dangerous. As Romeo and Juliet know, they took their lives for each other. In the end we all look at it and see how Romeo fell for Juliet right after Rosalie. When you go after one girl and then another, you have to be crazy for love.
YESS!!! its really good i think
YEA! Thanks Brad!
Needs a bit of work...
i mean i found it prettty entertain but yeah it could be more persussasive but overrall its pretty good
How can I make it more pursasive?
Use better evidence, have facts, quotes and stuff. Give examples. Not just you said so, show why you ARE right.