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Buildings tumbling fast all hope seems out of grasp I got a loose hold on this life and im loosing ground fast just rid me of all pain and strife I got've get a move on and better make this life last cause i know the storm clouds will soon pass despite my falls and failings the trembles and wailings of a depressed soul I'll endure this battle and remain whole even when I've fallen and nothing but darkness has risen in front of me my faith won't be stolen no this spec of hope will embolden and it embodies me when i least expect it, it hits me out of the darkness the light becomes clear and i no longer fear cause He's here When it seems like all is vanity And I'm on the brink of insanity He guides me He provides me With a new hope With strength to cope With a long rope He pulls me up When I'm down Downtrodden When everything's gone rotten even when I've fallen and nothing but darkness has risen in front of me my faith won't be stolen no this spec of hope will embolden and it embodies me when i least expect it, it hits me out of the darkness the light becomes clear and i no longer fear cause He's here In the face of distress When my whole life's a mess When I'm under a lot of stress He picks me up He lifts me up He makes it good when life gets tough He rubs me off when I'm just a diamond in the rough And I don't fear When He's here
It's called: Father
Lovely, well done.
Thank you! :)
I think you mean new poem. Unless you have a melody. In which case, I'd really like to hear it.
By definition this can be called a song @tanner23456
can it though? let's take a look at definition. song: A short poem or other set of words set to music or meant to be sung while a song does require a poem, they are two different things. It says right in the definition that music or in other words a melody is required for it to be considered a song.
Elise this is really good im very proud of you :)
This is very well done. It has great potential. I hope to hear what you come up with.
This is really good id love to hear you sing it :)
oh thank you!
Get it! i can imagine this. i am a musical critic in my own right and i value ingenuity.