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The first word needs an "s" on the end. The next sentence would sound better if it were written like this: "It was interesting because it happened when she was almost out of her childhood and because her experiences can be applied to our daily lives." I see a lot of places where you could change your wording some I could help you more if you'd like...
You might want to delete your essay off of here before you submit it because the teachers use some weird program that searches phrases from the work on the interent and says if there's anything that matches it. I know it sucks :/ plus someone's going to steal it and then the teachers will say you stole it.