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Comm.Dan

  • one year ago

How do you write a topic sentence for a single body paragraph that supports your thesis?

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  1. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    well it depends on what you are writing about. usually it talks about what you will be talking about in the paragraph or it introduces the paragraph

  2. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Ok it is about comparing the story Flowers for Algernon by Daniel Keys and the movie, Charly directed by Ralph Nelson.

  3. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    just come up with a sentence that explains what you will be talking about. i cannot give you a sentence because i have never read those books.

  4. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Ok What do you think it should be about? Here I will give you a little summary of each First, Flowers for Algernon there is a man whose real name is Charles, who tries everything possible to get smarter. And then the movie, Charly, a man named Charlie Gordon isn’t smart as other people, and to get smarter he was selected to receive a surgery called artificial intelligence.

  5. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    well lets try to think of something based on the fact that in both stories then men were trying to become smarter.

  6. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    They are both the same man

  7. Comm.Dan
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    From both the story and the movie

  8. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    oh so its just a movie version of the story?

  9. countonme123
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    or am i wrong here?

  10. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    I'm done with the first paragraph

  11. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    It is both the movie and the story, I am supposed to compare them and have to write it in MLA format.

  12. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    ok

  13. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    that should be easy how many paragraphs do you need?

  14. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    3

  15. Comm.Dan
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    One is already done

  16. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    ok then one should be a run down of the gerneral story second paragraph should be similarities third should be differences

  17. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Here I will tell u the format that I have to follow 1. Intro Paragraph 2. Only Body Paragraph 3. Conclusion Paragraph

  18. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    oh ok that puts a twist on things

  19. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Here is the notes that I am following to help me This is three notes

  20. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    And these notes contain nothing hazardous like viruses

  21. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    hmm i dont download files

  22. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    It doesn't work on your PC or Mac

  23. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Ok then I will think of something and then tell you so then u can give me ur opinion

  24. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    no its just i dont trust files like that

  25. countonme123
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    ok sounds good

  26. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Alright That is totally fine by me

  27. Comm.Dan
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    Do you want to see my thesis?

  28. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    um you can send a screenshot

  29. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Because in the notes for body paragraph it says that my topic sentence has to support my thesis and tell what the body paragraph is about I can't take a screenshot on my PC, I will copy and paste my thesis for you to see.

  30. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Both the book, Flowers for Algernon, and the movie, Charly are similar in ways, I believe that Charly goes more into depth than does Flowers for Algernon.

  31. countonme123
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    This is my edit take it or leave it ^_^ ---------------------------------------------------------- Both the book, Flowers for Algernon, and the movie, Charly are similar in ways. I believe that Charly goes further into depth than Flowers for Algernon does.

  32. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Alright I like that a little bit more than mine. Are you very good at Grammar and Writing?

  33. countonme123
    • one year ago
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    on a scale of 1-10 i would rate my self as an 8.5 ^_^ not the best but good

  34. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Ok I rate myself on that same scale as a 7.5

  35. countonme123
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    ok well yah. it seems like you are doing well. if you need help let me know.

  36. Comm.Dan
    • one year ago
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    Ok Thx

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