anonymous
  • anonymous
Hey! I wrote and copyrighted a new song called "The Beast." I would love ANY feedback (as long as it isn't rude). I need to get an understanding of how people will view the song for what it is, and the best way I can do that is to show the lyrics ONLY. (That way no one will be focused on just the sound.) Then I can post how it will sound! :D Thanks in advance! :)
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schrodinger
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anonymous
  • anonymous
Somebody told me that I'm a Beauty And as a Beauty, I need to tread carefully, mm-hmm Well I believed them, I am a good girl But they didn't say how hard it could be How hard it could be I didn't know that you'd come for me Should have known trouble'd be coming for me They didn't warn me, brace me, save me Oh my my, they forgot the Beast I can't believe it, I'm not a seeker For trouble, so it goes and seeks me out, mm-hmm, mm-hmm Owners of pure hearts rebuke temptation Especially when it has a handsome face A handsome face I didn't know that a Beast could have Pretty eyes - and nobody told me They didn't warn me, brace me, save me Oh my my my, they forgot the Beast I didn't know that you'd come for me (Beast with pretty eyes) Should have known trouble'd be coming for me (and nobody told me) They didn't warn me, brace me, save me Oh my my, they forgot the Beast They forgot the Beast (3x) They forgot the Beast © Christal Morris
anonymous
  • anonymous
WOW....THIS IS INCREDIBLE (and I can totally relate to this!!!) Good job GURL :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Can you tell me how copyright your stuff? Because I love writing songs as well and I don't want my lyrics stolen

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anonymous
  • anonymous
:D Thank you! Okay, to copyright is actually pretty easy. First, you need to make sure that you didn't accidentally copy anyone else. But usually, that's not a problem when you write your own stuff. Then, you can use a site like this http://myows.com/ to copyright for free. However, when you write something original, it is yours by domain, so you can legally put a copyright sign to anything you create on your own. OR you could go to the US Copyright board and register it for a $35 fee...
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks so much!!!
anonymous
  • anonymous
:D Of course! :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
This is great keep it up !!!!!!!!!
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you so much @helter-skelter12345 ! :D
anonymous
  • anonymous
I cant post my work cause its "Inappriote xD"
anonymous
  • anonymous
LOL
anonymous
  • anonymous
wow XD well there you go
anonymous
  • anonymous
Its not bad. you use a lot of repetitive lyrics try not to do that so much unless it is in the cores and add more rhymes to it other than that good job.
anonymous
  • anonymous
It's kind of an abstract song. It's a ballad. So the repetitive parts ARE in the cores, and that would be why I don't rhyme so often. If this were a rap, though, I would've been more on point with the rhyme scheme. :) Thanks!

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