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lala2

  • 2 years ago

Please help me with ideas!

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  1. radar
    • 2 years ago
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    Describe his physical attributes, age, face, eyes, posture, manner of dress etc.

  2. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    @Agent_Sniffles

  3. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    @ash2326 !

  4. ash2326
    • 2 years ago
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    Yes @lala2 Try to describe in a way radar told

  5. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    @ash2326 can You help me with how to describe an aging fathers eyes

  6. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    whats a descriptive way to describe wise, dark chocolate, almond shaped eyes.

  7. lala2
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    @ash2326??

  8. Compassionate
    • 2 years ago
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    Wise

  9. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    yeah wise

  10. Compassionate
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    Are you doing FLVS

  11. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    no whats that

  12. Compassionate
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    Anymore questions?

  13. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    this is one of my sentences His dark chocolate eyes are tender, wise, and very gentle , the same eyes that

  14. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    I want to add how those gentle eyes are the same ones he used to talk serioously to me

  15. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    or discipline me.. something like that

  16. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    That sounds really good @Compassionate ! Could I use this!

  17. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    Did you just write this?

  18. lala2
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    @Compassionate

  19. Compassionate
    • 2 years ago
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    I wrote it myself. Feel free. I'll have to delete it so she doesn't trace it back, though. Go ahead and copy it. Let me know when you have it so I can delete it.

  20. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    This is about my dad so I dont want to make him seem to old.. what Can I do

  21. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    I copied it thanks!

  22. Compassionate
    • 2 years ago
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    Copy and paste what you have so far. I'll edit it to look more professional? :)

  23. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    Yeah I copy and pasted thanks so much.. but yeah I dont want him to seem to old

  24. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    I had an idea! I want to add how as i have grown up I haven't really thought about how my dad was also growing... Do you get what Im trying to say

  25. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    As I grow my daddy does also... Is that a little more clear

  26. Compassionate
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    I understand. Give me a second to write something.

  27. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    ok!

  28. Compassionate
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    Some Typos I made. "His skin DAMAGED" not Damage. "Father." <-- PERIOD. Not a Comma.

  29. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    This sounds FANTASTIC! I pasted it already! The only thing is that its a descriptive essay so it wants alot of description!

  30. Compassionate
    • 2 years ago
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    Hmm... Did I not give enough description?

  31. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    I LOVE the last paragraph! You are right there id alot of description. I had not yet finished reading it

  32. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    *is

  33. lala2
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    It sounds great! I love it!

  34. Compassionate
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    :) Can I delete it now? Have you pasted it?

  35. lala2
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    You can erase it!

  36. Compassionate
    • 2 years ago
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    Anything else?

  37. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    um I wanted to write about what makes him unique Im not sure how to be descriptive about that! any ideas?

  38. Compassionate
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    What are some things he did for you that you feel no one can compare to?

  39. lala2
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    He loves his family, he is the one that taught me to smile and be happy. he cares about others and loves to give!

  40. lala2
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    He is a loving husband and Fantastic father

  41. Compassionate
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    >carbon dioxide should NOT be capital. Oops.

  42. lala2
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    ahh that sounds so nice!

  43. Compassionate
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    Did you paste it?

  44. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    Yeah thanks!

  45. lala2
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    You are an excellent writer!

  46. lala2
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    I pasted it!

  47. Compassionate
    • 2 years ago
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    Hmm. Thanks. I'm a bit tired. But you need anything else?

  48. lala2
    • 2 years ago
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    I think im ok for now! will you be on tommorrow around the same time?

  49. Compassionate
    • 2 years ago
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    Probably. I gave you more than 5 paragraphs. Shouldn't that be enough for an essay?

  50. lala2
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    Yeah! it probably will be! Thanks again for all the help!

  51. Compassionate
    • 2 years ago
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    Welcome

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