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Describe his physical attributes, age, face, eyes, posture, manner of dress etc.
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@Agent_Sniffles
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@ash2326 !
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Yes @lala2 Try to describe in a way radar told
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@ash2326 can You help me with how to describe an aging fathers eyes
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whats a descriptive way to describe wise, dark chocolate, almond shaped eyes.
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@ash2326??
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Wise
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yeah wise
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Are you doing FLVS
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no whats that
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Anymore questions?
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this is one of my sentences
His dark chocolate eyes are tender, wise, and very gentle , the same eyes that
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I want to add how those gentle eyes are the same ones he used to talk serioously to me
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or discipline me.. something like that
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That sounds really good @Compassionate ! Could I use this!
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Did you just write this?
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I wrote it myself. Feel free. I'll have to delete it so she doesn't trace it back, though. Go ahead and copy it. Let me know when you have it so I can delete it.
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This is about my dad so I dont want to make him seem to old.. what Can I do
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I copied it thanks!
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Copy and paste what you have so far. I'll edit it to look more professional? :)
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Yeah I copy and pasted thanks so much.. but yeah I dont want him to seem to old
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I had an idea! I want to add how as i have grown up I haven't really thought about how my dad was also growing... Do you get what Im trying to say
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As I grow my daddy does also... Is that a little more clear
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I understand. Give me a second to write something.
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ok!
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Some Typos I made.
"His skin DAMAGED" not Damage.
"Father." <-- PERIOD. Not a Comma.
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This sounds FANTASTIC! I pasted it already! The only thing is that its a descriptive essay so it wants alot of description!
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Hmm... Did I not give enough description?
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I LOVE the last paragraph! You are right there id alot of description. I had not yet finished reading it
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*is
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It sounds great! I love it!
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:) Can I delete it now? Have you pasted it?
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You can erase it!
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Anything else?
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um I wanted to write about what makes him unique Im not sure how to be descriptive about that! any ideas?
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What are some things he did for you that you feel no one can compare to?
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He loves his family, he is the one that taught me to smile and be happy. he cares about others and loves to give!
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He is a loving husband and Fantastic father
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>carbon dioxide should NOT be capital. Oops.
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ahh that sounds so nice!
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Did you paste it?
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Yeah thanks!
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You are an excellent writer!
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I pasted it!
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Hmm. Thanks. I'm a bit tired. But you need anything else?
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I think im ok for now! will you be on tommorrow around the same time?
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Probably. I gave you more than 5 paragraphs. Shouldn't that be enough for an essay?
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Yeah! it probably will be! Thanks again for all the help!
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Welcome