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Describe his physical attributes, age, face, eyes, posture, manner of dress etc.
Yes @lala2 Try to describe in a way radar told
@ash2326 can You help me with how to describe an aging fathers eyes
whats a descriptive way to describe wise, dark chocolate, almond shaped eyes.
Are you doing FLVS
no whats that
this is one of my sentences His dark chocolate eyes are tender, wise, and very gentle , the same eyes that
I want to add how those gentle eyes are the same ones he used to talk serioously to me
or discipline me.. something like that
That sounds really good @Compassionate ! Could I use this!
Did you just write this?
I wrote it myself. Feel free. I'll have to delete it so she doesn't trace it back, though. Go ahead and copy it. Let me know when you have it so I can delete it.
This is about my dad so I dont want to make him seem to old.. what Can I do
I copied it thanks!
Copy and paste what you have so far. I'll edit it to look more professional? :)
Yeah I copy and pasted thanks so much.. but yeah I dont want him to seem to old
I had an idea! I want to add how as i have grown up I haven't really thought about how my dad was also growing... Do you get what Im trying to say
As I grow my daddy does also... Is that a little more clear
I understand. Give me a second to write something.
Some Typos I made. "His skin DAMAGED" not Damage. "Father." <-- PERIOD. Not a Comma.
This sounds FANTASTIC! I pasted it already! The only thing is that its a descriptive essay so it wants alot of description!
Hmm... Did I not give enough description?
I LOVE the last paragraph! You are right there id alot of description. I had not yet finished reading it
It sounds great! I love it!
:) Can I delete it now? Have you pasted it?
You can erase it!
um I wanted to write about what makes him unique Im not sure how to be descriptive about that! any ideas?
What are some things he did for you that you feel no one can compare to?
He loves his family, he is the one that taught me to smile and be happy. he cares about others and loves to give!
He is a loving husband and Fantastic father
>carbon dioxide should NOT be capital. Oops.
ahh that sounds so nice!
Did you paste it?
You are an excellent writer!
I pasted it!
Hmm. Thanks. I'm a bit tired. But you need anything else?
I think im ok for now! will you be on tommorrow around the same time?
Probably. I gave you more than 5 paragraphs. Shouldn't that be enough for an essay?
Yeah! it probably will be! Thanks again for all the help!