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shinesupernova

  • 3 years ago

how does this sound through out my life I have learned many things I learned to be me because people should love me for who I am and not who they want me to be, I learned not to listen to what people have to say because I am who I am and that's who I will stay, but the most important thing I think I have learned is to smile through the pain because one day things will be better no matter how hard it is now

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  1. LifeIsADangerousGame
    • 3 years ago
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    I tihnk it's nice :D I just suggest a few changes :) Throughout my life, I have experienced and learned many things. I have learned to be me because people should love me for who I am and not who they want me to be. I learned [not to listen to what people have to say] (there is a such thing as constructive criticism and it is something you might want to listen to because it could help you become a better person but still stay you! You might want to change this a little) because I am who I am and that's who I will stay, but the most important thing I believe I have learned is to smile through pain. Pain is temporary and one day things will be brighter no matter how hard it is right now.

  2. LifeIsADangerousGame
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    think*

  3. shinesupernova
    • 3 years ago
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    thanks I will change something's

  4. LifeIsADangerousGame
    • 3 years ago
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    Alright! :)

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