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Poetrylover

  • 3 years ago

Anyone thnk this is okay? ''you'' Your smile is like the sun, With warmth spreading all around, And here i feel it with my feet on the ground, Like the eyes upon your soul, I cannot look away, Just as a storm is coming across the bay. With your arms around me, It is all in security, And I finally feel safe in your company. You laugh freely, And it fills me with joy, For right now I'm just a girl and you a boy. When i feel you kiss me nigh, I know my dreams are guarded, When my shining knight is by, And that is all i could hope for when i look in your eyes. i need some

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  1. allopersonwhat
    • 3 years ago
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    awesome i love its touching

  2. Poetrylover
    • 3 years ago
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    thank you :)

  3. tanner23456
    • 3 years ago
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    This really has great song potential all you need is a melody and a chorus and your there.

  4. Poetrylover
    • 3 years ago
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    tnks tanner i havnt really learned chords yet in class. :)

  5. tanner23456
    • 3 years ago
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    What class are you in?

  6. Poetrylover
    • 3 years ago
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    beginning music theory. i stated in 4th quit in 5th overloaded. just started back in 8th. still playing though.

  7. tanner23456
    • 3 years ago
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    oh cool. Well you don't need chords to make a melody just pick a key. I personally like minor keys.

  8. Poetrylover
    • 3 years ago
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    yeah me to i luv the d string but the lowness of g is great for melody's. im workin on the isle for a dance at my prom.

  9. tanner23456
    • 3 years ago
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    That's cool. Yeah I would say just play around til you hear something you like.

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