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Poetrylover

  • 2 years ago

guys i need feedback someone commet, pease? when i was little, daddy you told me nothin would hurt me, you lied. the fightin and the lies, rejection, the silence, hurts. mommy you said someone would be there to help catch me, no ones there and i fell straight to the ground. i cried tonight wishing for the pain to end. just waitin for someone to finally be there, that i can depend on. to fall for, to talk to. im waitin, waitin for you. whoever you are, ill be the maiden waitin for that somone to take me away and save me. no more lies, i want to feel, be whole again.

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  1. Raven5
    • 2 years ago
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    thats so sad..... :/ i totally understand this.. i have those very feelings! just i never thought about them really i have always been positive about my past n wow that was just touching....

  2. Poetrylover
    • 2 years ago
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    um thanks. :) im tryin to move on better.

  3. Raven5
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    welcome.

  4. Poetrylover
    • 2 years ago
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    :)

  5. dusty
    • 2 years ago
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    aww thats so sad that put a tear in my eye!!

  6. katie__michelle
    • 2 years ago
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    Aww that is a very good poem... I love it!!!

  7. shordycordy
    • 2 years ago
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    Its really pretty :) its so touching, god job!

  8. shordycordy
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    *good

  9. Chooch146
    • 2 years ago
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    awwwhh this is so depressing! don't worry some will will come for you:]

  10. Tylers_Babygirl101
    • 2 years ago
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    Aweee this is soooo touching...... Someone will be there for you...

  11. Mid_night132
    • 2 years ago
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    unicorn buddy that is so touching and the poem made me cry

  12. MarieSoLoved
    • 2 years ago
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    thts deep nice work:)

  13. Poetrylover
    • 2 years ago
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    i didnt want u guys to cry.

  14. TakenByMikka;D
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    i might be a guy but i realkly liked this:)

  15. Poetrylover
    • 2 years ago
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    thnks.

  16. TakenByMikka;D
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    anytime:)

  17. Poetrylover
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    :)

  18. Poetrylover
    • 2 years ago
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    thnk for ur guys feedback. i luv u guys. commet on my other poems please.

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