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Can someone please read my introduction and tell me any grammar errors or mistakes. This is the question Discuss how the texts you have studied have conveyed the importance of self-reflection and change in an individual’s inner journey. Im supposed to write like 5 pages on it and this is my intro :)

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    Discuss how the texts you have studied have conveyed the importance of self-reflection and change in an individual’s inner journey. My 3 texts are My place(1987) - Book Brokedown Palace(1999) - Film Australian Womens Weekly feature article Oprah, A Women Of Substance(February 2005) An individual’s inner journey is a catalyst of personal elevation. The change and self-reflection on one’s self is necessary as the very nature of inner journey requires an individual to constructively develop and grow. Inner journey changes an individual as they advance from maturity into naivety into maturity, and self-reflection and maturity are fundamental to this. In relation to inner journey, Sally Morgan’s post-colonial auto-biography My place(1987), Jonathan Baplan’s film, Brokedown Palace(1999) and Australian Women’s Weekly feature article Oprah, A Women Of Substance(February 2005) portrays an individual undergoing an inner journey where self-reflection and change is paramount.

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    I only found two subject/verb agreement issues; where is should be are(sentence 2 and last one). The change and self-reflection on one self's are where self-reflection and change are Capitalize title : My Place (Titles of books need to be italicized too) Brokedown Palace (titles of film needs to be italicized) Of should not be capitalized in "Oprah, A Women of Substance." (names of articles should be in quotation marks) I would suggest to change this sentence:" Inner journey changes an individual as they advance from maturity into naivety into maturity, and self-reflection and maturity are fundamental to this.: Make it two sentences. It would flow much better. These links will help you understand quotation/italics http://owl.english.purdue.edu/engagement/2/1/44/ http://owl.english.purdue.edu/engagement/2/1/45/ Good luck with your paper!

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