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- writing letters, and be able understand ^Should be to be able OR being able. :)
- in nonpolitical organization like the church should be organizationS
That's alll I have time for! Sorry! I'll try and come backkk!!
rights era blacks enthusiasm ^ It should be black's enthusiasm. But I really wouldn't reccomend using black at all. Try African American.
-- As result, this left black mainly As A result, this left blacks mainly
--Nevertheless, church void of civic skills in blacks by providing leadership development in position of deacons, chairs for men and women committee for the church , and trustee. ^ I don't understand this sentence, bu maybe it's just mee.
-church gradual learned how to navigate ^ grudaly. and learns, would fit better in this sentencd.
-- important to black at that ^ to THE black or blackS
-- The data display African Americans ^ The data displayed or displays. And you used African Americans here, wich you need to do all along!! It's just BETTER. Trust me :) And for whites... just use White Americans or something like it. :)
That's all I can find in the first one :) Hope I helped!!!
FOR THE 2ND ONE, THE INTERVIEW - - - - most importantly the country future. ^ the Country's future - - - These survey gives sense on level ^ These serveyS give
- Thesis statement: If blacks youth who lack civic skills due to external factors attend church on a regularly bases different civic skills will developed which will lead to productive civic engagement. = I would say - If African American youth members who lack civic skills or something in that mannor.
--- certain extent still exist today is effort in mobilizing ^^Comma after today
---, beside social media efforts, besideS
Of course, I don't know what this essay is for and/or the purpus of the about. But in some parts it seemed to be bashing church... wich I didn't get, and is NOT good. But that could just be how I read it. And I HIGHTLYYYYYYYY reccomend using African Americans!!! :) I hope I helped in some way!! Good luck & God bless!
Actually I approving the church to be an environment in fostering civic engagement specifically for African American
Thanks for checking my paper
Oh, God bless ya too!
Oh ok, good! :) Like I said, I didn't really knoww about it. lol Good job though!!! Np, and thank you!!! :)