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razor99

  • one year ago

Zombie Story

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  1. razor99
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    @CoughCoughAchoo

  2. razor99
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    @Hope_nicole

  3. razor99
    • one year ago
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    TO BE CONTINUED :p

  4. Zale101
    • one year ago
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    @razor99 I like the description in your story, Good Job!

  5. razor99
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    Thanx :D

  6. Zale101
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    I'm stil reading it though

  7. Zale101
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    Is this present tense or past tense?

  8. razor99
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    lol present i guess

  9. Zale101
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    When you wrote: "Cheyenne voice broked into my deep thinking in my mind" it should be written: "Cheyenne voice broke into my deep thinking in my mind"

  10. razor99
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    yea thanx i will correct it

  11. Zale101
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    or Cheyenne voice broke into my deep thoughts in my mind.

  12. Zale101
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    You wrote: "Cheynne said holding her hand over her mouth" It would be easier if you just said: "Cheynne said covering her mouth disgustedly."

  13. Zale101
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    You wrote: As I spoked to the co-pilots. The character was speaking with only one pilot?

  14. Zale101
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    And i think that's about it. I'm looking forward to read more :)

  15. razor99
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    no no the chatacter was speaking with both of them

  16. razor99
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    thanx for the help

  17. Zale101
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    Oh sorry...My bad :O

  18. razor99
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    done it with correction

  20. Zale101
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    never expected that lol :D

  21. Zale101
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    Great Job! :D

  22. razor99
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    hahahahaha i love my story thats why

  23. razor99
    • one year ago
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    Thanx to u u deserve credit for that

  24. Zale101
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    :D

  25. razor99
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    Omg visitors C:

  26. razor99
    • 8 months ago
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    lol what ya think

  27. Austin9
    • 8 months ago
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    That was a Awesome Story man!!!!

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