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Why should I care what other people think of me? I am who I am. And who I wanna be. Oh, how I wish you could see everything that’s happening to me. I probably shouldn’t say this, but at times I get scared, when I think about the previous relationship we shared. It was awesome, but we lost it. It’s not possible, for me, not to care. You used to call me your dreamer and now I’m living without my dream. Oh, how I wish you could see everything that’s happening to me. but now I’m thinking back on the past, and it’s true that time is flying by so fast. My heart won’t let you go, and I need you to know, I miss you. And now we’re standing in the rain, but nothings ever gonna change, You just stood there looking at me, so why didn't you just leave me be But now look at where we are, You're still here protecting me I tried to let you slip away, but all you would do is just stay You said I love you, and I said it too. The only difference is that I didn't lie to you. You should know that you hurt me but you didn't even seem to care, all you did was just say Im sorry for the way i have been acting, but I will never go away. You should know this about a girl by know But you should know why instead of asking me why Silence is a girls loudest cry She is not just hurt but broken too You know she's really hurt when she ignores you It hurts to think that you were once mine but now all you are is just another memory That I can not lose or seem to hide The only thing that comes to mind Is that My heart won’t let you go, and I need you to know, I miss you. When you ask me if I'm okay All I will do is just walk away
I liketh0is good job
wow, felt like that a bit as well as my best friends. gave my heart to a lot of others. :( never the one.
What's the point of asking for feedback if you're going to limit it to only positive feedback? Sounds like you just want a pat on the back rather than actual advice on improvement for the future.
we're supposed to have positive critiscism tanner.
Ya I know. People can give me tips and advice if they want. That is not considered being negative or rude or mean. Its being helpful so its a positive thing. Negative remarks are like this sucks or this is bad. or something like that.
This is good!! Maybe you could record it and put it on youtube or something like that!! It is really amazing! The only thing I can say is keep writing it maybe make it a little longer :)
its how you feeling and thats very great
This is good cheer! It takes a lot of courage to write the way you feel and put it out in public. Keep it up, it is really coming along! (: Maybe keep adding a little bit more. But so far SO good!
Dang! This is really good! Keep it up!
By the way don't limit yourself! (:Keep writing/typing! that's the beauty of words, there is no rules to it. Just free yourself within it! Letting it all out in a piece of paper (computer or phone in this case) is a great technique to relief you and truly express yourself. Stay beautiful doll! <3
its good but theres one problem. It sounds just like every other song ever written ;~; unless youve got a super-sick beat all mapped out in your head then this song wont get anywhere.