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Melissajoy

  • 3 years ago

I wish you would fall again and not miss the late night calls. My life is breaking down and I need you here but it's too late to ask you to come home. I need you here to keep me safe from making a huge mistake. Is this good? I just came up with it one the spot? Possibly lyrics to a song haha!

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  1. LIZFAUSTNICCALS
    • 3 years ago
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    its pretty good, you should change the last line up a little bit cx the best music is the unpredictable kiiind^___^

  2. Melissajoy
    • 3 years ago
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    Awesome! Thanks!

  3. Poetrylover
    • 3 years ago
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    nice they sound good. ;)

  4. madhatter
    • 3 years ago
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    I like it but maybe you should elaborate more with the words that is

  5. Lovergirl12221
    • 3 years ago
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    HA yep!

  6. mikaela19900630
    • 3 years ago
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    I like the flow of it ut maybe try to add some different words that fit in better and like @LIZFAUSTNICCALS said change the first line because it is to predicatable about what the song will be about. Maybe try something that just shows feelings or a memory of what you had together :)

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