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my short story has to be about someone that tries to be like someone else due to jealousy. so i picked a cat that wanted to be a dog. Any suggestions? (about what topic i should pick ex: fox wants to be a cat, blah blah blah)
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someone???? And you picked a cat and a dog? Animals are not people.
it can be a human or animal
So if you have picked a cat and a dog what is the problem?
you want someone to write it for you or what?
And animals do not have the capacity to want to be something else. A dog does not know it is a dog.
no no a need suggestions like topic that i can wirte about i want more
and thats why i came here for help! :)
So it sounds to me like the purpose of the exercise is to have the student explore the phoniness and futility of trying to be something one is not. At least that is the way I would approach it. And you should know that I am terrible as this sort of thing.
in class i read an Aesop fable. its about a donkey that wanted to be a dog. But at the end he learns that its better to be donkey than a dog. after reading this i was asked to write a story about someone or animal that wanted to be someone else.
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Some what yes but no :P
Yeah, it's a good topic. I have something
okay go ahead :)
WHy don't you do two girls that are total opposite for ex . one girl can be adventuresses ,hates girly stuff a tom boy but the is ms .popular loves pink etc.
Dogs are man's friend, certain investigation agencies have dogs, They help in cases. But cats aren't employed, you can now turn this into a story. One cat and dog used to be good friends, but then dog got hired into FBI. They couldn't hangout much and so cat started feeling if it could be a dog and so on @Tahmina What do you think of this?
@ash2326 love it perfect! now i just need to fill in these bubles using your topic
Looks like we have our story @ash2326 That seems like a great topic!
Haha Thanks @nathan917
Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City. THATS ALL I HAVE IM LOST! HELP I
ok then the rufus gets called away to go to the agencies and leaves megan behind she get mad
There is never any question in bio, but there was a good questions last night went on for social study's and it went on for like 6 hrs it was about "The Rise or Rome" Seems like there is only good questions in math. For some reason That is the most popular place for questions.
okay:) sice this is an intro doesnt it have to be flowing like i mean wordy and engaing.
And sometime language arts.
They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship.
so this is the intro that you helped ash:DONT I NEED A INTRODUCING SENTENCE HERE OR SHOULD I JUST START LIKE THIS. Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship.
*It all started out as a short story* 5 day later It becomes A chapter book :P @ash2326
ASH IS BRILLIANT
and all of you others too :) thanks ash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I think this is good :) @Tahmina thanks :)
Yes. I would agree with that. Language arts in really not my best topic i more of a math guy or science kinda person.
I think you should stretch a bit, maybe include an anecdote of their camaraderie
Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship. Then one day while rufus and megan were PLAYING, Rufus got a call from the FBI. He was a dog needed for that kind of job. THEN WHAT SHOULD I INCLUDE?
n anecdote of their camaraderie whats that? their past?
Rufus was a strong and agile dog, Megan was a cutie pie. Rufu was protective of Megan
Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship. Then one day while rufus and megan were PLAYING, Rufus got a call from the FBI. He was a dog needed for that kind of job. Rufus was a strong and agile dog, Megan was a cutie pie. Rufu was protective of Megan. When Megan heard about this, she was fustrated that she dint get a job like Rufus did. So she started planning how she was going to be like Rufus.
okay? or just to broad? if it is can u edit it pleease?
Ok, just hold on for 2 minutes
please write your corrections in capital :) thanks
Well Tc all I'm calling a 15 min day :D I'm sure ash can help you with the rest. Gl guys cya have fun!
Give me 5 minutes, I'll help you @Tahmina
this is getting hard.
Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship....... Rufus was agile and a strong dog, on the other hand Megan was a cute and small cat. One afternoon Rufus was asleep, Megan thought she should get food for both of them. She went to the next block, she had got good food outside a hotel. She was returning, then a group of dogs surrounded her. She got really afraid. @tahmina how's this?
okay i think i know what direction your going in so megan got surrounding my many dogs then rufus came to save her. okay then i need body paragrpahs to go along
is that it^^
oh i need dialogue too:)
no need for dialog, some FBI agents witness Rufus's strength and reflexes. They thought they should hire him, they come to hire him after a week.
@Tahmina What do you think?
oh okay! love it! but i need megan to get jealous so she can (so she wants to be like rufus thats the point of the story.) then how megan chages her appearence so she can be like rufus
At first, she misses him, it's hard for her to pass days. No one to play with, no one to protect here. She thinks I should also join FBI, that way we both can be together.
One fine day, Rufus comes to meet her. She expresses her desire to join FBI. Rufus laughs, and tells her that you are so small and tender. You can't join FBI. This hurts Megan, and she becomes jealous of Rufus.
For few days, she cries a lot and wish If she were a dog. She could also join FBI
@Tahmina What do you say?
Now you add something :)
okay i need n to add something but i need topics like apperance etx
let me think
It too her fews days to get out of this, but she came out to be stronger than before. She started going far for food, it'd take her hours to get food for one time. And she wasn't afraid of anyone . This struggling strengthened her, she was a furious cat now. The dogs which surrounded her few months back, wouldn't even dare to cross her path. She started engaging in fights.
can i add to it?
yeah sure, this is you story :)
Megan was known as a"daredevil" ( i couldn't think of any others). Another group of Fbi noticed her. And she too, was hired for a job.
the what should i add
To spice things up, she was noticed by secret services and FBI :) Both the agencies wanted to hire her, FBI thought Rufus would be able to get her in FBI. But she rejected him badly, she was not that sweet kitty anymore. She chose Secret services, they nicknamed her "Black Widow"
oh im lost now i dont know what to add after that brilliant ^^^thing! help me plz
im having a long brainfart!!!!!!!!!!
I think you can name the story as Black Widow, the reader would be guessing all along, why the story has this name.
yeah i was thinking that :)
Great minds think alike ;)
I think your story is done :)
well it s not me whos great it u :)
We've worked together on this :)
can i add tp it on my own? i want megan to realize its (the job) is not right for her.
Yeah sure, add anything you want (:
but can u help me i like your style of writing and yeah <3
All was going well for Megan, she was getting raises and promotions. No one called her Megan anymore, she was Black Widow now. One day, she was chasing some thugs, she passed through the same block where she and rufus lived.
She saw that Rufus was there, he was in a bad shape. Weak and his ribs were visible. He had changed. She talked to him, he was thrown out of FBI a year back, because he was not the same. That made Megan into thinking, she won't be the same always. Eventually she will grow old, like Rufus she could be thrown out of Secret Services.
How is this? @Tahmina
Are you here?
sorrry i had to go somewhere but im back
Read this and share your views :)
your like einstein man love your wrting <3 ugg i wish i can be u!
ha ha it's ok, I'm not like the great Einstein :) happy to help :)
i can take it from here. thanks for aLLLL your help man. one more thing i need a conclusion so i can have atleast 4 paragrpahs
I think you can have conclusion as, Sometimes in life, some things attract us so much, we chase them leaving behind our loved ones, friends and family. Most likely we are able to get them. Only after getting them, we realize that they are not that fulfilling as they seem. We realize that love is the only thing we can keep us and take with us, other things are empty.
what do you say sir?
love it great job!!!!!!
Thanks you :)