anonymous
  • anonymous
hey i need help with this short story that i need to write :)
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anonymous
  • anonymous
my short story has to be about someone that tries to be like someone else due to jealousy. so i picked a cat that wanted to be a dog. Any suggestions? (about what topic i should pick ex: fox wants to be a cat, blah blah blah)
anonymous
  • anonymous
@.Sam. @help123please. @Mertsj
anonymous
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@ryan123345 @nubeer

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anonymous
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@uri @SnuggieLad @Preetha
anonymous
  • anonymous
@skullpatrol
Mertsj
  • Mertsj
someone???? And you picked a cat and a dog? Animals are not people.
anonymous
  • anonymous
it can be a human or animal
anonymous
  • anonymous
:)
Mertsj
  • Mertsj
So if you have picked a cat and a dog what is the problem?
Mertsj
  • Mertsj
you want someone to write it for you or what?
Mertsj
  • Mertsj
And animals do not have the capacity to want to be something else. A dog does not know it is a dog.
anonymous
  • anonymous
no no a need suggestions like topic that i can wirte about i want more
anonymous
  • anonymous
and thats why i came here for help! :)
Mertsj
  • Mertsj
So it sounds to me like the purpose of the exercise is to have the student explore the phoniness and futility of trying to be something one is not. At least that is the way I would approach it. And you should know that I am terrible as this sort of thing.
anonymous
  • anonymous
in class i read an Aesop fable. its about a donkey that wanted to be a dog. But at the end he learns that its better to be donkey than a dog. after reading this i was asked to write a story about someone or animal that wanted to be someone else.
anonymous
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@nathan917 @nett2600 @nubeer @ash2326 @Ashleyisakitty @ahtnamas @bakonloverk @Callisto @DerNurmister @EthanJumper @help123please @Hoa @iluvreading @kaylalynn @M_Vamshi_Kumar_Reddy @MotherOfGod @merchandize
anonymous
  • anonymous
sorry that i tagged to many people
nathan917
  • nathan917
Some what yes but no :P
ash2326
  • ash2326
Yeah, it's a good topic. I have something
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay go ahead :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
WHy don't you do two girls that are total opposite for ex . one girl can be adventuresses ,hates girly stuff a tom boy but the is ms .popular loves pink etc.
anonymous
  • anonymous
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ash2326
  • ash2326
Dogs are man's friend, certain investigation agencies have dogs, They help in cases. But cats aren't employed, you can now turn this into a story. One cat and dog used to be good friends, but then dog got hired into FBI. They couldn't hangout much and so cat started feeling if it could be a dog and so on @Tahmina What do you think of this?
anonymous
  • anonymous
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anonymous
  • anonymous
@ash2326 love it perfect! now i just need to fill in these bubles using your topic
nathan917
  • nathan917
Looks like we have our story @ash2326 That seems like a great topic!
ash2326
  • ash2326
Haha Thanks @nathan917
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay introduction:
anonymous
  • anonymous
Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City. THATS ALL I HAVE IM LOST! HELP I
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok then the rufus gets called away to go to the agencies and leaves megan behind she get mad
nathan917
  • nathan917
There is never any question in bio, but there was a good questions last night went on for social study's and it went on for like 6 hrs it was about "The Rise or Rome" Seems like there is only good questions in math. For some reason That is the most popular place for questions.
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay:) sice this is an intro doesnt it have to be flowing like i mean wordy and engaing.
nathan917
  • nathan917
And sometime language arts.
ash2326
  • ash2326
They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship.
anonymous
  • anonymous
so this is the intro that you helped ash:DONT I NEED A INTRODUCING SENTENCE HERE OR SHOULD I JUST START LIKE THIS. Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship.
nathan917
  • nathan917
*It all started out as a short story* 5 day later It becomes A chapter book :P @ash2326
anonymous
  • anonymous
ASH IS BRILLIANT
anonymous
  • anonymous
and all of you others too :) thanks ash!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ash2326
  • ash2326
I think this is good :) @Tahmina thanks :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
welcome ;)
nathan917
  • nathan917
Yes. I would agree with that. Language arts in really not my best topic i more of a math guy or science kinda person.
anonymous
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ash2326
  • ash2326
I think you should stretch a bit, maybe include an anecdote of their camaraderie
anonymous
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Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship. Then one day while rufus and megan were PLAYING, Rufus got a call from the FBI. He was a dog needed for that kind of job. THEN WHAT SHOULD I INCLUDE?
anonymous
  • anonymous
n anecdote of their camaraderie whats that? their past?
ash2326
  • ash2326
Rufus was a strong and agile dog, Megan was a cutie pie. Rufu was protective of Megan
anonymous
  • anonymous
Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship. Then one day while rufus and megan were PLAYING, Rufus got a call from the FBI. He was a dog needed for that kind of job. Rufus was a strong and agile dog, Megan was a cutie pie. Rufu was protective of Megan. When Megan heard about this, she was fustrated that she dint get a job like Rufus did. So she started planning how she was going to be like Rufus.
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay? or just to broad? if it is can u edit it pleease?
ash2326
  • ash2326
Ok, just hold on for 2 minutes
anonymous
  • anonymous
kk :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
please write your corrections in capital :) thanks
nathan917
  • nathan917
Well Tc all I'm calling a 15 min day :D I'm sure ash can help you with the rest. Gl guys cya have fun!
anonymous
  • anonymous
bye
ash2326
  • ash2326
Give me 5 minutes, I'll help you @Tahmina
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay
anonymous
  • anonymous
this is getting hard.
ash2326
  • ash2326
Megan the cat and Rufus the dog were best friends. They lived in an condo in New York City.They used to hang out all the time, used to play ball. Have food together, they were the best friends, other dogs and cats were jealous of their friendship....... Rufus was agile and a strong dog, on the other hand Megan was a cute and small cat. One afternoon Rufus was asleep, Megan thought she should get food for both of them. She went to the next block, she had got good food outside a hotel. She was returning, then a group of dogs surrounded her. She got really afraid. @tahmina how's this?
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay i think i know what direction your going in so megan got surrounding my many dogs then rufus came to save her. okay then i need body paragrpahs to go along
anonymous
  • anonymous
is that it^^
anonymous
  • anonymous
oh i need dialogue too:)
ash2326
  • ash2326
no need for dialog, some FBI agents witness Rufus's strength and reflexes. They thought they should hire him, they come to hire him after a week.
ash2326
  • ash2326
@Tahmina What do you think?
anonymous
  • anonymous
oh okay! love it! but i need megan to get jealous so she can (so she wants to be like rufus thats the point of the story.) then how megan chages her appearence so she can be like rufus
ash2326
  • ash2326
At first, she misses him, it's hard for her to pass days. No one to play with, no one to protect here. She thinks I should also join FBI, that way we both can be together.
ash2326
  • ash2326
One fine day, Rufus comes to meet her. She expresses her desire to join FBI. Rufus laughs, and tells her that you are so small and tender. You can't join FBI. This hurts Megan, and she becomes jealous of Rufus.
ash2326
  • ash2326
For few days, she cries a lot and wish If she were a dog. She could also join FBI
ash2326
  • ash2326
@Tahmina What do you say?
anonymous
  • anonymous
love it!
ash2326
  • ash2326
Thanks !!!
ash2326
  • ash2326
Now you add something :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay i need n to add something but i need topics like apperance etx
ash2326
  • ash2326
let me think
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok
ash2326
  • ash2326
It too her fews days to get out of this, but she came out to be stronger than before. She started going far for food, it'd take her hours to get food for one time. And she wasn't afraid of anyone . This struggling strengthened her, she was a furious cat now. The dogs which surrounded her few months back, wouldn't even dare to cross her path. She started engaging in fights.
ash2326
  • ash2326
*took
anonymous
  • anonymous
can i add to it?
ash2326
  • ash2326
yeah sure, this is you story :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Megan was known as a"daredevil" ( i couldn't think of any others). Another group of Fbi noticed her. And she too, was hired for a job.
anonymous
  • anonymous
the what should i add
ash2326
  • ash2326
To spice things up, she was noticed by secret services and FBI :) Both the agencies wanted to hire her, FBI thought Rufus would be able to get her in FBI. But she rejected him badly, she was not that sweet kitty anymore. She chose Secret services, they nicknamed her "Black Widow"
anonymous
  • anonymous
oh im lost now i dont know what to add after that brilliant ^^^thing! help me plz
anonymous
  • anonymous
im having a long brainfart!!!!!!!!!!
ash2326
  • ash2326
I think you can name the story as Black Widow, the reader would be guessing all along, why the story has this name.
anonymous
  • anonymous
yeah i was thinking that :)
ash2326
  • ash2326
Great minds think alike ;)
ash2326
  • ash2326
I think your story is done :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
well it s not me whos great it u :)
ash2326
  • ash2326
We've worked together on this :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
can i add tp it on my own? i want megan to realize its (the job) is not right for her.
ash2326
  • ash2326
Yeah sure, add anything you want (:
anonymous
  • anonymous
but can u help me i like your style of writing and yeah <3
ash2326
  • ash2326
All was going well for Megan, she was getting raises and promotions. No one called her Megan anymore, she was Black Widow now. One day, she was chasing some thugs, she passed through the same block where she and rufus lived.
ash2326
  • ash2326
brb
anonymous
  • anonymous
kk
ash2326
  • ash2326
She saw that Rufus was there, he was in a bad shape. Weak and his ribs were visible. He had changed. She talked to him, he was thrown out of FBI a year back, because he was not the same. That made Megan into thinking, she won't be the same always. Eventually she will grow old, like Rufus she could be thrown out of Secret Services.
ash2326
  • ash2326
How is this? @Tahmina
ash2326
  • ash2326
Are you here?
anonymous
  • anonymous
sorrry i had to go somewhere but im back
ash2326
  • ash2326
Read this and share your views :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
your like einstein man love your wrting <3 ugg i wish i can be u!
ash2326
  • ash2326
ha ha it's ok, I'm not like the great Einstein :) happy to help :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
i can take it from here. thanks for aLLLL your help man. one more thing i need a conclusion so i can have atleast 4 paragrpahs
ash2326
  • ash2326
I think you can have conclusion as, Sometimes in life, some things attract us so much, we chase them leaving behind our loved ones, friends and family. Most likely we are able to get them. Only after getting them, we realize that they are not that fulfilling as they seem. We realize that love is the only thing we can keep us and take with us, other things are empty.
ash2326
  • ash2326
what do you say sir?
anonymous
  • anonymous
love it great job!!!!!!
ash2326
  • ash2326
Thanks you :)

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