anonymous
  • anonymous
The assignment was to describe the setting in a fashionable way. What do you think?
Writing
katieb
  • katieb
I got my questions answered at brainly.com in under 10 minutes. Go to brainly.com now for free help!
At vero eos et accusamus et iusto odio dignissimos ducimus qui blanditiis praesentium voluptatum deleniti atque corrupti quos dolores et quas molestias excepturi sint occaecati cupiditate non provident, similique sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollitia animi, id est laborum et dolorum fuga. Et harum quidem rerum facilis est et expedita distinctio. Nam libero tempore, cum soluta nobis est eligendi optio cumque nihil impedit quo minus id quod maxime placeat facere possimus, omnis voluptas assumenda est, omnis dolor repellendus. Itaque earum rerum hic tenetur a sapiente delectus, ut aut reiciendis voluptatibus maiores alias consequatur aut perferendis doloribus asperiores repellat.

Get this expert

answer on brainly

SEE EXPERT ANSWER

Get your free account and access expert answers to this
and thousands of other questions

anonymous
  • anonymous
It was a particularly dark night. The sky, usually scattered with a flickering glow from the light of the ever-present stars, now stood as dark and lifeless as ever. The sliver of the crescent moon, timid without the stars shining brightly beside him, cowered behind the thin veil of clouds, giving off an eerie, almost vaporous sheen. The wind howled through the bare, leafless branches of the Oak trees, almost as if the ghosts of their lost splendor whined in disgust at the hollow skeletal frame it had become. The frosty, bitter air nipped at my shoulders, causing me shiver and rub my hands against my arms in a futile attempt to warm them. I pulled my thin cardigan tighter around my freezing body, thankful that I was almost home.
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ash2326 @bobby4234534523 @CaityxD @Darrius @Fey @hopiesoapy @ifelloffabridge2
anonymous
  • anonymous
y did you mention me

Looking for something else?

Not the answer you are looking for? Search for more explanations.

More answers

ash2326
  • ash2326
@AngelDreamGurl It's Great :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
um any of you now why she mentioned me
anonymous
  • anonymous
@bobby4234534523 I wanted to know what you thought....
anonymous
  • anonymous
okkkk well its great, i like it
anonymous
  • anonymous
thanks, anything you'd change?
anonymous
  • anonymous
It was a particularly (insert a prerogative here) dark night. The sky, usually scattered with a flickering glow from the light of the ever-present stars (is it the part of the world where sky is always clear? o.O), (and here, it) now stood (before the protagonist) as dark and lifeless as ever (can/could be). The sliver of the crescent moon, (so)timid without the (very) stars (which shone/)shining brightly beside him, cowered behind the thin veil of clouds, giving off an eerie, almost vaporous sheen. The wind howled through the bare, leafless branches of the Oak trees, almost as if the ghosts of their lost splendor whined in disgust at the hollow skeletal frame it had become(/had it become). The frosty, bitter air nipped at my shoulders, causing me shiver and rub my hands against my arms in a futile attempt to warm them. I pulled my thin cardigan tighter around my freezing body, thankful(ly) that I was almost home. I have mostly been against first person narrative. They reveal too much detail. Or so I feel. Anyway, that was a critical summary. I believe a little more word play could add to the alluring airs. The rambling about the sky could have been cut off and instead given a total descript of the over all surrounding. Or so I feel, now you can totally ignore me, or expand your horizons and discover some new styles of narratives. A setting is more than the ghostly sky, afterall. I hope you're writing something substantial there. *thumbs up*

Looking for something else?

Not the answer you are looking for? Search for more explanations.