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ilikechicken5ever

  • 3 years ago

I created a sentence for English class using the word pallor. Is this grammatically correct? Would I need a comma after deer? I'm sorry I'm not very good at this -_- The pallor of the little girl’s face indicated that she had just seen a terrible sight -- a carcass of a dead deer while frolicking in the woods. or The pallor of the little girl’s face indicated that she had just seen a terrible sight -- a carcass of a dead deer, while frolicking in the woods.

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  1. LaynaMae
    • 3 years ago
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    The second sentence is grammatically correct

  2. ilikechicken5ever
    • 3 years ago
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    Thank you very much.

  3. LaynaMae
    • 3 years ago
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    You're very welcome !

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