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LilySwan

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  1. LilySwan
    • one year ago
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    Directions: Rewrite the paragraph below, correcting any homonyms or other errors. Save your paragraph as a Word (.doc) document and submit below as an attachment. The Blew Bare Their once was a blew bare who had an exceptable job as an ade to a wealthy man. This bare tried deserts and smelled cented candles all day long. After a while he had to say by to his employer because he gained two much wait and was not aloud on the train. His doctor had adviced him to lift steal and right down all the food that he eight throughout the day. He then joined the gym and rode won stationery bike in the mourning. This was the best advise anyone had ever given him. He was not longer feeling blew about being to large for the train because he new that their were many things for a bare too due two get healthy. A few months later he went too the train for a ride. The train officials no longer said, “Your two big for this train, “butt invited him in for a ride. Bare new that from this day on he would take his health seriously. He even wrote a blog to share with others.

  2. LilySwan
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    Directions: Rewrite the paragraph below, correcting any homonyms or other errors. Save your paragraph as a Word (.doc) document and submit below as an attachment. The Blue Bear There once was a blew bare who had an acceptable job as an aid to a wealthy man. This bear tried deserts and smelled scented candles all day long. After a while he had to say by to his employer because he gained too much wait and was not aloud on the train. His doctor had advised him to lift steal and right down all the food that he eight throughout the day. He then joined the gym and rode won stationary bike in the mourning. This was the best advice anyone had ever given him. He was not longer feeling blew about being too large for the train because he knew that their were many things for a bare too due two get healthy. A few months later he went to the train for a ride. The train officials no longer said, “ You're too big for this train, “but invited him in for a ride. Bare knew that from this day on he would take his health seriously. He even wrote a blog to share with others.

  3. LilySwan
    • one year ago
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    can you tell me that the correction of the paragraph i have done is right

  4. zhane2015
    • one year ago
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    which one is the correction??

  5. ucreategames
    • one year ago
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    I want to help.

  6. ucreategames
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    I can do them.

  7. iluvreading
    • one year ago
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    i can help too

  8. ucreategames
    • one year ago
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    Ill copy the paragraph and highlight what you need to correct.

  9. LilySwan
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    The Blue Bear There once was a blew bare who had an acceptable job as an aid to a wealthy man. This bear tried deserts and smelled scented candles all day long. After a while he had to say by to his employer because he gained too much wait and was not aloud on the train. His doctor had advised him to lift steal and right down all the food that he eight throughout the day. He then joined the gym and rode won stationary bike in the mourning. This was the best advice anyone had ever given him. He was not longer feeling blew about being too large for the train because he knew that their were many things for a bare too due two get healthy. A few months later he went to the train for a ride. The train officials no longer said, “ You're too big for this train, “but invited him in for a ride. Bare knew that from this day on he would take his health seriously. He even wrote a blog to share with others.

  10. ucreategames
    • one year ago
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    lol

  11. LilySwan
    • one year ago
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    above post is the one that i got after correction

  12. zhane2015
    • one year ago
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    *Blue *Bear *desserts *Bye *Weight *allowed *steel *write *ate *morning *one *there *do

  13. ucreategames
    • one year ago
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    change blew to blue. deserts to desserts. a while to awhile. by to bye. wait to weight. aloud to allowed. steal to steel. right to write. after all and before the, there should be the word "of". eight to ate. not is supposed to be no.blew into blue. their into there. bare to bear. too to to. due to do. two to to. bare to bear.

  14. zhane2015
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    change by to *bye

  15. LilySwan
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    where is by written

  16. zhane2015
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    "After a while he had to say..."

  17. ucreategames
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    turn blew into blue.

  18. LilySwan
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    The Blue Bear There once was a blue bear who had an acceptable job as an aid to a wealthy man. This bear tried desserts and smelled scented candles all day long. After a while he had to say bye to his employer because he gained too much weight and was not allowed on the train. His doctor had advised him to lift steel and write down all the food that he ate throughout the day. He then joined the gym and rode one stationary bike in the morning. This was the best advice anyone had ever given him. He was no longer feeling blue about being too large for the train because he knew that there were many things for a bear to do two get healthy. A few months later he went to the train for a ride. The train officials no longer said, “ You're too big for this train, “but invited him in for a ride. Bear knew that from this day on he would take his health seriously. He even wrote a blog to share with others.

  19. ucreategames
    • one year ago
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    CHANGE TWO to TO.

  20. LilySwan
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    The Blue Bear There once was a blue bear who had an acceptable job as an aid to a wealthy man. This bear tried desserts and smelled scented candles all day long. After a while he had to say bye to his employer because he gained too much weight and was not allowed on the train. His doctor had advised him to lift steel and write down all the food that he ate throughout the day. He then joined the gym and rode one stationary bike in the morning. This was the best advice anyone had ever given him. He was no longer feeling blue about being too large for the train because he knew that there were many things for a bear to do to get healthy. A few months later he went to the train for a ride. The train officials no longer said, “ You're too big for this train, “but invited him in for a ride. Bear knew that from this day on he would take his health seriously. He even wrote a blog to share with others.

  21. ucreategames
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    Yup.

  22. zhane2015
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    Great Job on correcting :)

  23. LilySwan
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    is there any punctuation error

  24. ucreategames
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    I think they were all corrected. Just submit it.

  25. zhane2015
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    I agree with @ucreategames , you did a great job @LilySwan

  26. ucreategames
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    @Mertsj Their? Im sure that it would be there.

  27. Mertsj
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    Where is it? I don't see it.

  28. Mertsj
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    Oh. Now I see it. Yes. Should be there

  29. Mertsj
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    The Blue Bear There once was a blue bear who had an acceptable job as an aide to a wealthy man. This bear tried desserts and smelled scented candles all day long. After a while he had to say bye to his employer because he gained too much weight and was not allowed on the train. His doctor had advised him to lift steel and write down all the food that he ate throughout the day. He then joined the gym and rode one stationary bike in the morning. This was the best advice anyone had ever given him. He was no longer feeling blue about being too large for the train because he knew that there were many things for a bear to do to get healthy. A few months later he went to the train for a ride. The train officials no longer said, “You're too big for this train,“ but invited him in for a ride. Bear knew that from this day on he would take his health seriously. He even wrote a blog to share with others.

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