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ta123

  • one year ago

could someone please edit this paper?

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  1. ta123
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  2. AshleyWagnerCA
    • one year ago
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    do you still need help? if you do send me a message with the help and i will get back to you tomorrow. i can definitely help you. just to let you know i have to log off. so just message me the detts.

  3. Zale101
    • one year ago
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    The first paragraph you wrote " a nation builder " I think it should be capitilzed.

  4. ta123
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    ok

  5. Zale101
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    You wrote in the first paragraph "working in group settings" it would be better written as "working in-group settings" add the dash

  6. ta123
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    ok

  7. Zale101
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    In the thrid paragraph, you wrote "engaged the best church that show this is Orange Chapel." It would be in a good grammar if you wrote "church that shows"

  8. Zale101
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    Your essay is Awesome by the way :D Barely has a grammar mistake.

  9. ta123
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    Thanks, so you say I should write the sentence in the third paragraph, like this "the church that shows most civic engagement is the Orange Chapel"

  10. Zale101
    • one year ago
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    Also, you need to learn more about MLA format, especially when you cite inside the essay. Like for example, you wrote in the 3rd paragraph (McDaniel, 2013, p. 44). Don't put the year or the word p. (page). It’s supposed to be written like this (McDaniel 44).

  11. Zale101
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    Yeah. Write it like that :)

  12. ta123
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    Oh, well I'm doing APSA(Political science citiation)

  13. ta123
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    is that the wrong format for in-text citation for APSA

  14. ta123
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    ?

  15. Zale101
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    It would work, i thought you were doing the MLA format.

  16. ta123
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    oh, ok well no worries

  17. Zale101
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    Sorry for replying late, I was examining your essay.

  18. ta123
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    That totally fine

  19. Zale101
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    “administrative duties which led to increase” You wrote this sentence in the 4th paragraph. Well, if you want to write the word “which,” you need to put the comma before. “duties, which” or without that coma “administrative duties 'that' led”

  20. ta123
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    I have to go run some errands right now, so I have to get offline, but thanks for proofread/edit my paper I really appreciate it

  21. Zale101
    • one year ago
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    Ok, your welcome. thanks for the medal :)

  22. ta123
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    I hope you can get through before tommrrow since its due by 5pm

  23. ta123
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    no prob!

  24. Zale101
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    Ok. I'll see about that.

  25. ta123
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    Are you still going to finish checking my paper?

  26. Zale101
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    Yes.

  27. Zale101
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    The last word in the 3rd paragraph "activites" is spelled wrong.

  28. Zale101
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    The first paragraph you wrote "its female members needs with the equal chance " It should be written as "female member's" you know how to use apostrophe in plurals. Right?

  29. Zale101
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    You did the mistake again, and this time with "a male members"

  30. Zale101
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    i think that's about it.

  31. ta123
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    Thanks, so much

  32. Zale101
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    Your Welcome :)

  33. ta123
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    OOh, forgot to ask when you said It should be written as "female member's", should I delete the word "its" before "female member's"?

  34. Zale101
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    It would work great either with it or without it.

  35. ta123
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    oh, ok thanks again

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