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ta123
 2 years ago
could someone please edit this paper?
ta123
 2 years ago
could someone please edit this paper?

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AshleyWagnerCA
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0do you still need help? if you do send me a message with the help and i will get back to you tomorrow. i can definitely help you. just to let you know i have to log off. so just message me the detts.

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2The first paragraph you wrote " a nation builder " I think it should be capitilzed.

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2You wrote in the first paragraph "working in group settings" it would be better written as "working ingroup settings" add the dash

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2In the thrid paragraph, you wrote "engaged the best church that show this is Orange Chapel." It would be in a good grammar if you wrote "church that shows"

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Your essay is Awesome by the way :D Barely has a grammar mistake.

ta123
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Thanks, so you say I should write the sentence in the third paragraph, like this "the church that shows most civic engagement is the Orange Chapel"

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Also, you need to learn more about MLA format, especially when you cite inside the essay. Like for example, you wrote in the 3rd paragraph (McDaniel, 2013, p. 44). Don't put the year or the word p. (page). It’s supposed to be written like this (McDaniel 44).

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Yeah. Write it like that :)

ta123
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Oh, well I'm doing APSA(Political science citiation)

ta123
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1is that the wrong format for intext citation for APSA

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2It would work, i thought you were doing the MLA format.

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Sorry for replying late, I was examining your essay.

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2“administrative duties which led to increase” You wrote this sentence in the 4th paragraph. Well, if you want to write the word “which,” you need to put the comma before. “duties, which” or without that coma “administrative duties 'that' led”

ta123
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1I have to go run some errands right now, so I have to get offline, but thanks for proofread/edit my paper I really appreciate it

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Ok, your welcome. thanks for the medal :)

ta123
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1I hope you can get through before tommrrow since its due by 5pm

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2Ok. I'll see about that.

ta123
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1Are you still going to finish checking my paper?

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2The last word in the 3rd paragraph "activites" is spelled wrong.

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2The first paragraph you wrote "its female members needs with the equal chance " It should be written as "female member's" you know how to use apostrophe in plurals. Right?

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2You did the mistake again, and this time with "a male members"

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2i think that's about it.

ta123
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1OOh, forgot to ask when you said It should be written as "female member's", should I delete the word "its" before "female member's"?

Zale101
 2 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.2It would work great either with it or without it.
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