anonymous
  • anonymous
could someone please edit this paper?
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anonymous
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anonymous
  • anonymous
do you still need help? if you do send me a message with the help and i will get back to you tomorrow. i can definitely help you. just to let you know i have to log off. so just message me the detts.
Zale101
  • Zale101
The first paragraph you wrote " a nation builder " I think it should be capitilzed.

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anonymous
  • anonymous
ok
Zale101
  • Zale101
You wrote in the first paragraph "working in group settings" it would be better written as "working in-group settings" add the dash
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok
Zale101
  • Zale101
In the thrid paragraph, you wrote "engaged the best church that show this is Orange Chapel." It would be in a good grammar if you wrote "church that shows"
Zale101
  • Zale101
Your essay is Awesome by the way :D Barely has a grammar mistake.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks, so you say I should write the sentence in the third paragraph, like this "the church that shows most civic engagement is the Orange Chapel"
Zale101
  • Zale101
Also, you need to learn more about MLA format, especially when you cite inside the essay. Like for example, you wrote in the 3rd paragraph (McDaniel, 2013, p. 44). Don't put the year or the word p. (page). It’s supposed to be written like this (McDaniel 44).
Zale101
  • Zale101
Yeah. Write it like that :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Oh, well I'm doing APSA(Political science citiation)
anonymous
  • anonymous
is that the wrong format for in-text citation for APSA
anonymous
  • anonymous
?
Zale101
  • Zale101
It would work, i thought you were doing the MLA format.
anonymous
  • anonymous
oh, ok well no worries
Zale101
  • Zale101
Sorry for replying late, I was examining your essay.
anonymous
  • anonymous
That totally fine
Zale101
  • Zale101
“administrative duties which led to increase” You wrote this sentence in the 4th paragraph. Well, if you want to write the word “which,” you need to put the comma before. “duties, which” or without that coma “administrative duties 'that' led”
anonymous
  • anonymous
I have to go run some errands right now, so I have to get offline, but thanks for proofread/edit my paper I really appreciate it
Zale101
  • Zale101
Ok, your welcome. thanks for the medal :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
I hope you can get through before tommrrow since its due by 5pm
anonymous
  • anonymous
no prob!
Zale101
  • Zale101
Ok. I'll see about that.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Are you still going to finish checking my paper?
Zale101
  • Zale101
Yes.
Zale101
  • Zale101
The last word in the 3rd paragraph "activites" is spelled wrong.
Zale101
  • Zale101
The first paragraph you wrote "its female members needs with the equal chance " It should be written as "female member's" you know how to use apostrophe in plurals. Right?
Zale101
  • Zale101
You did the mistake again, and this time with "a male members"
Zale101
  • Zale101
i think that's about it.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks, so much
Zale101
  • Zale101
Your Welcome :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
OOh, forgot to ask when you said It should be written as "female member's", should I delete the word "its" before "female member's"?
Zale101
  • Zale101
It would work great either with it or without it.
anonymous
  • anonymous
oh, ok thanks again

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