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The first paragraph you wrote " a nation builder " I think it should be capitilzed.
You wrote in the first paragraph "working in group settings" it would be better written as "working in-group settings" add the dash
In the thrid paragraph, you wrote "engaged the best church that show this is Orange Chapel." It would be in a good grammar if you wrote "church that shows"
Your essay is Awesome by the way :D Barely has a grammar mistake.
Thanks, so you say I should write the sentence in the third paragraph, like this "the church that shows most civic engagement is the Orange Chapel"
Also, you need to learn more about MLA format, especially when you cite inside the essay. Like for example, you wrote in the 3rd paragraph (McDaniel, 2013, p. 44). Don't put the year or the word p. (page). It’s supposed to be written like this (McDaniel 44).
Yeah. Write it like that :)
Oh, well I'm doing APSA(Political science citiation)
is that the wrong format for in-text citation for APSA
It would work, i thought you were doing the MLA format.
oh, ok well no worries
Sorry for replying late, I was examining your essay.
That totally fine
“administrative duties which led to increase” You wrote this sentence in the 4th paragraph. Well, if you want to write the word “which,” you need to put the comma before. “duties, which” or without that coma “administrative duties 'that' led”
I have to go run some errands right now, so I have to get offline, but thanks for proofread/edit my paper I really appreciate it
Ok, your welcome. thanks for the medal :)
I hope you can get through before tommrrow since its due by 5pm
Ok. I'll see about that.
Are you still going to finish checking my paper?
The last word in the 3rd paragraph "activites" is spelled wrong.
The first paragraph you wrote "its female members needs with the equal chance " It should be written as "female member's" you know how to use apostrophe in plurals. Right?
You did the mistake again, and this time with "a male members"
i think that's about it.
Thanks, so much
Your Welcome :)
OOh, forgot to ask when you said It should be written as "female member's", should I delete the word "its" before "female member's"?
It would work great either with it or without it.
oh, ok thanks again