I haven't written in a while so please tell me how it sounds, Thanks :
Why ? Why do things happen ? Why are things in life so complicated ? Why are things that are so precious to us get taken away in a matter of time ? Life, family, friends, love ones, pets, opportunities, and what not. Why is our world filled with horrid acts of corruption in our soceity ? Why do people do the things that they do ? Hurt, kill, molest, kidnapp, gossip, and more. Why ? That is the question, the main question to be.. Why ?
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It's "loved ones." I would take out "what not" because the tone of the passage turns from serious to somewhat informal. Actually, I would fix it like this: Why is life so complicated? Why are the most precious parts of life, the parts that make it worthwhile, get taken away? Why is our society filled with horrid acts of corruption? Why do people do the things that they do? Hurt, kill, molest, gossip, and even more horrid acts. Why? That is the question to be answered... But why?
Also, are you going to specifically answer the questions later on in your paper? If you aren't, then I would tone done on the question asking. It does give it a dramatic vibe though and I'm assuming that you are going to write about something personal that has happened.
Maybe she was writing it in poetry form, which technically would mean she didn't have to answer them because they're meant to make you wonder.