anonymous
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please help edit this
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anonymous
  • anonymous
https://docs.google.com/document/d/19PSWstlyz1k1kWaqUmr_dLWLUsthfn4oQeFvb5XRPi4/edit
anonymous
  • anonymous
@Zale101 @zepdrix @BulletWithButterflyWings @thomaster @april115
anonymous
  • anonymous
@poopsiedoodle

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Zale101
  • Zale101
I need to see the question first?
anonymous
  • anonymous
uggg atleast i have zale
anonymous
  • anonymous
there is no question i just need help editing my paper :)
Zale101
  • Zale101
Okay, i love editing
anonymous
  • anonymous
:)
Zale101
  • Zale101
but i cant judge how good i am, cuz u know, i'm a good critic
Zale101
  • Zale101
where is the paper?
Zale101
  • Zale101
Where you put "and she has gallbladder stones that needs serious" doesn't sound correct to me. "needs" doesn't go well with the sentence so replace it with "need "
Zale101
  • Zale101
Where you write "He sits on the bed and hold Lilah’s hand tightly and started to say " replace the word hold with holds. "holds Lilah's hands"
anonymous
  • anonymous
where do you see this i dont see it can u indicate it or fix it with a different color?
Zale101
  • Zale101
in the second last paragraph: 2 days later after Lilah was starting to recover, Sam came into the room with his hands behind his back. Lilah was still sleeping at that moment. He sits on the bed and hold Lilah’s hand tightly and started to say
anonymous
  • anonymous
yeah what happened
Zale101
  • Zale101
the sentence above, u wrote: “ Its okay Lilah will be fine, Don't worry. Nothing will happen to Lilah. I promise!!!!” said Sams mom. the word (its) means the possession of like for example (the dog caught its ball) so replace it with "it's" as in "it is" so it best fits the sentence.
anonymous
  • anonymous
k
Zale101
  • Zale101
u can ctrl+f to find the sentence i'm telling u to fix.
Zale101
  • Zale101
Does that sound clear? :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
its okay i found it also i need a title
Zale101
  • Zale101
Love at First sight, i think it's a good title
anonymous
  • anonymous
kk is edititng finshed zale?
Zale101
  • Zale101
not yet lol your paper is too long, i need some time
anonymous
  • anonymous
sorry
anonymous
  • anonymous
areu still editing sorry for asking it shows when u are editing ususally but not now
Zale101
  • Zale101
In the sentence u wrote, "Oh Sam I love you too, You are the sweetest person ever. I want to be with you also.” "You" doesn't need to be capitalized..
Zale101
  • Zale101
cuz your putting a comma
anonymous
  • anonymous
kk gtg
Zale101
  • Zale101
See ya :)

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