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Tahmina

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please help edit this

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  1. Tahmina
    • 2 years ago
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    https://docs.google.com/document/d/19PSWstlyz1k1kWaqUmr_dLWLUsthfn4oQeFvb5XRPi4/edit

  2. Tahmina
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    @Zale101 @zepdrix @BulletWithButterflyWings @thomaster @april115

  3. Tahmina
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    @poopsiedoodle

  4. Zale101
    • 2 years ago
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    I need to see the question first?

  5. Tahmina
    • 2 years ago
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    uggg atleast i have zale

  6. Tahmina
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    there is no question i just need help editing my paper :)

  7. Zale101
    • 2 years ago
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    Okay, i love editing

  8. Tahmina
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    :)

  9. Zale101
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    but i cant judge how good i am, cuz u know, i'm a good critic

  10. Zale101
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    where is the paper?

  11. Zale101
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    Where you put "and she has gallbladder stones that needs serious" doesn't sound correct to me. "needs" doesn't go well with the sentence so replace it with "need "

  12. Zale101
    • 2 years ago
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    Where you write "He sits on the bed and hold Lilah’s hand tightly and started to say " replace the word hold with holds. "holds Lilah's hands"

  13. Tahmina
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    where do you see this i dont see it can u indicate it or fix it with a different color?

  14. Zale101
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    in the second last paragraph: 2 days later after Lilah was starting to recover, Sam came into the room with his hands behind his back. Lilah was still sleeping at that moment. He sits on the bed and hold Lilah’s hand tightly and started to say

  15. Tahmina
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    yeah what happened

  16. Zale101
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    the sentence above, u wrote: “ Its okay Lilah will be fine, Don't worry. Nothing will happen to Lilah. I promise!!!!” said Sams mom. the word (its) means the possession of like for example (the dog caught its ball) so replace it with "it's" as in "it is" so it best fits the sentence.

  17. Tahmina
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    k

  18. Zale101
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    u can ctrl+f to find the sentence i'm telling u to fix.

  19. Zale101
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    Does that sound clear? :)

  20. Tahmina
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    its okay i found it also i need a title

  21. Zale101
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    Love at First sight, i think it's a good title

  22. Tahmina
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    kk is edititng finshed zale?

  23. Zale101
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    not yet lol your paper is too long, i need some time

  24. Tahmina
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    sorry

  25. Tahmina
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    areu still editing sorry for asking it shows when u are editing ususally but not now

  26. Zale101
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    In the sentence u wrote, "Oh Sam I love you too, You are the sweetest person ever. I want to be with you also.” "You" doesn't need to be capitalized..

  27. Zale101
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    cuz your putting a comma

  28. Tahmina
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    kk gtg

  29. Zale101
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    See ya :)

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