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Nice paper. I don't see any spelling, grammar errors...
I was told that there are run ons and the conventions need fixing but i have looked at this paper so much i do not notice it
Gaw My worst mistakes too. XD;
I know i really hate the mistakes. I can't wait to be done with this paper
this seems to have very long sentence "Due to the amount of broken doors there are lines forming in the restrooms because of the lines for the working stall doors the toilet paper runs out causing the users to use the broken stalls." Let's find a way to shorten it a bit.
Due to the amount of broken stall doors there are lines forming for the working stalls. This causes the working stalls to run out of toilet paper which then has the users to use the broken stalls.
the last sentence does not work so ignore that and i think it is good
Ok how about this one "Although the school has staff that patrols the hallways the school also needs a security guard on standby just in case the next wandering person is not homeless and means to cause harm to the students." seem long as well.
keep the security guards and cut out the school patrol staff
Awesome No more run ons.
oh is there anything else that looks like it needs fixing?
Hmm, What is conventions mean in your writing class?
i have no idea although my teacher did say it was the commas and periods
"This, in turn, can help people afford the things they need to get by." Seems odd.
"How the building is set up can have a great influence on how the students do with their learning. " Needs to have a ? mark in there.
thanks for the help but i need to go, my study period is over
good luck ;)