anonymous
  • anonymous
Please give some feedback on these lyrics.They were written a long while back, and i was told told they are amazing, but I myself am not so sure. Something is off, and i would appreciate some outside opinions. By the way, it was written with the tune and musical arranged in a heavy metal style. They are copied into the comments below
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anonymous
  • anonymous
The wind is blowing like a savage, Pushing pulling grey clouds in, Across the sky-it's all I see I lie here weakly, pulling for air No one seems to care, they think they've win this fight But look again. I rise out of the ashes But they will fall to never rise again But my mind is spinning, what have I done? Where am I headed? Has power fled me Or did I never have it at all Society is headed straight for death Corus: So SCREAM for me! I need to find my voice Can I stop what I have started? SCREAM! Is everyone deaf to reality? Reality! Shout! Before it is too late! Degenerated generation Listen to a dying voice Retune yourself to olden wisdom Before we all die out Verse 2 Nintendo occupying hands of boredom iTunes screaming in our ears of lost but perfect love T.V.s playing at our eyes Buy! Buy! This will fix the world But has it worked yet? Yes would be a lie And love may be the answer But we won't find it here in senseless flatteries Where we are kings and queens of sports and rock n roll When in reality we are the kings and queens of broken hearts Broken promises, wasted dollar bills And we end in the pit of shame
anonymous
  • anonymous
TO be honest the more i look at them the more i am beginning to think they are pretty crappy
bagelini
  • bagelini
I think they're good. heavy metal isn't really my favorite, but i think it has a good message and i can totally see this.

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anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks so much:)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Hey--nice lyrics. Post a cover using them sometime :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
will do:)
anonymous
  • anonymous
I love em'! Honestly, they would make a beautiful song, heavy metal or not! :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
thanks for your input everyone:) wasn't so sure if i should do a cover but i guess i will now
anonymous
  • anonymous
thats really good, but I suggest you change win to won in your sentence 'they think they've win this fight'. also it's chorus, not corus @*Sumiko*
anonymous
  • anonymous
very good thank you so much. I missed those typos.
anonymous
  • anonymous
np

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