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anonymous
 3 years ago
can someone please proofread my paper?
anonymous
 3 years ago
can someone please proofread my paper?

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Senkai
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I think you need to fix some of the grammar in it, and put commas where they're needed, but other than that it looks good.

anonymous
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0You need also to fix your grammar and your capitalization :)

timaashorty
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1You used alot of big words which is pretty great, You just need a little fixing in the grammar just like everyone else said. Also you added additional periods (....) which isn't really needed.

timaashorty
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1did just copy stuff and pasted? Because when you started saying," line following.." it pretty much didn't make sense, but I proof edited a few stuff, hope I helped !

timaashorty
 3 years ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1I think all you need now, is to make a few sentences shorter, you use 'ands' and 'buts' in one sentence a bit too much.
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