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ta123

  • one year ago

can someone please proofread my paper?

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  1. ta123
    • one year ago
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  2. mikaa_toxica13
    • one year ago
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    Looks good to me

  3. Senkai
    • one year ago
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    I think you need to fix some of the grammar in it, and put commas where they're needed, but other than that it looks good.

  4. shei.caguitla
    • one year ago
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    You need also to fix your grammar and your capitalization :)

  5. shei.caguitla
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    Also the spacing

  6. timaashorty
    • one year ago
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    You used alot of big words which is pretty great, You just need a little fixing in the grammar just like everyone else said. Also you added additional periods (....) which isn't really needed.

  7. timaashorty
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    did just copy stuff and pasted? Because when you started saying," line following.." it pretty much didn't make sense, but I proof edited a few stuff, hope I helped !

  8. timaashorty
    • one year ago
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    I think all you need now, is to make a few sentences shorter, you use 'ands' and 'buts' in one sentence a bit too much.

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