anonymous
  • anonymous
can someone please proofread my paper?
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At vero eos et accusamus et iusto odio dignissimos ducimus qui blanditiis praesentium voluptatum deleniti atque corrupti quos dolores et quas molestias excepturi sint occaecati cupiditate non provident, similique sunt in culpa qui officia deserunt mollitia animi, id est laborum et dolorum fuga. Et harum quidem rerum facilis est et expedita distinctio. Nam libero tempore, cum soluta nobis est eligendi optio cumque nihil impedit quo minus id quod maxime placeat facere possimus, omnis voluptas assumenda est, omnis dolor repellendus. Itaque earum rerum hic tenetur a sapiente delectus, ut aut reiciendis voluptatibus maiores alias consequatur aut perferendis doloribus asperiores repellat.
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anonymous
  • anonymous
anonymous
  • anonymous
Looks good to me
Senkai
  • Senkai
I think you need to fix some of the grammar in it, and put commas where they're needed, but other than that it looks good.

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anonymous
  • anonymous
You need also to fix your grammar and your capitalization :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Also the spacing
timaashorty
  • timaashorty
You used alot of big words which is pretty great, You just need a little fixing in the grammar just like everyone else said. Also you added additional periods (....) which isn't really needed.
timaashorty
  • timaashorty
did just copy stuff and pasted? Because when you started saying," line following.." it pretty much didn't make sense, but I proof edited a few stuff, hope I helped !
timaashorty
  • timaashorty
I think all you need now, is to make a few sentences shorter, you use 'ands' and 'buts' in one sentence a bit too much.

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