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mikaa_toxica13 Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
Looks good to me
 11 months ago

Senkai Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0
I think you need to fix some of the grammar in it, and put commas where they're needed, but other than that it looks good.
 11 months ago

shei.caguitla Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0
You need also to fix your grammar and your capitalization :)
 11 months ago

shei.caguitla Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0
Also the spacing
 11 months ago

timaashorty Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
You used alot of big words which is pretty great, You just need a little fixing in the grammar just like everyone else said. Also you added additional periods (....) which isn't really needed.
 11 months ago

timaashorty Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
did just copy stuff and pasted? Because when you started saying," line following.." it pretty much didn't make sense, but I proof edited a few stuff, hope I helped !
 11 months ago

timaashorty Group TitleBest ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.1
I think all you need now, is to make a few sentences shorter, you use 'ands' and 'buts' in one sentence a bit too much.
 11 months ago
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