## Ratedover 2 years ago Could I get some help on my review? I answered all of them. But I'm not very confident on some. Questions will be in comments. Thanks.

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Monika’s draft of a reflective essay about her first trip to summer camp included the following sentences: I knew this camp was going to be a disappointment. I entered the dark, musty cabin and realized the window was nailed shut. There were cobwebs everywhere. Monica wanted to revise her draft to enhance her syntax. Monika’s new sentence is: When I entered the dark, musty cabin, realized the window was nailed shut, and noticed the cobwebs everywhere, I knew this camp was going to be a disappointment. Which statement BEST describes they type and effect of Monika’s revised sentence? A. It is a periodic sentence intended to build suspense, but it is punctuated incorrectly. B. It is a simple sentence intended to express quick action, but it is punctuated incorrectly. C. It is a correctly punctuated periodic sentence intended to build suspense by saving the main clause for the end of the sentence. D. It is a correctly punctuated simple sentence intended to express quick action.

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Linda’s draft of a reflective essay about her first day of work included the following: I was uncomfortable with the itchy polyester uniform. The flashing buttons on the computer screen were overwhelming for me. I was shocked by how many people ordered fast food in one day. Making it out alive was not a certainty. During revision, Linda combined sentences to improve the syntactical structure. Read the revised sentence. I was uncomfortable with the itchy polyester uniform, overwhelmed by the flashing buttons on the computer screen, shocked by how many people ordered fast food in one day, and uncertain I would make it out alive. Which statement BEST describes Linda’s new sentence? A. It is a correctly punctuated sentence that uses parallel structure to show that each of Linda’s feelings is given equal importance. B. It is a correctly punctuated sentence that lists ideas in order of descending importance. C. It is a correctly punctuated sentence that lists ideas in order of ascending importance. D. It is a sentence that uses parallel structure to show that each of Linda’s feelings is given equal importance, but it is punctuated incorrectly.

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The first one I choose A the second one I choose C.