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All across America, there are people who have guns illegally, and there are some who have them legally. There are some people who use guns for good reasons, bad reasons, or both. Guns should be banned, because it's polluting the minds of young children, gun owners do not respect the rules, and law abiding citizen should not be able to get access to guns
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All across the nation, there are many people who have guns illegally, and there are also many who have them legally. There are some people who use guns for acceptable reasons such as it giving them piece of mind or hunting, or some for unacceptable reasons like the intentions of seriously injuring or killing someone. Guns should be banned for polluting the minds of our children with violence. When you think of children u think of innocence right? Well today's adolescence are playing violent video games and watching violent TV shows that is promoting the violence. Our nations crime rate has gone up because of this and other reasons like us handing a gun right to them. Children don't know any better than what they learn from us. They can grow up to be psychopaths, like the "Joker" in Aurora, Colorado. Nobody saw anything wrong with him till he was in a movie theater shooting innocent people. Can you tell me that 100% of gun owners respect the rules and laws that come with owning a gun? No you can't so why give them access. If you are a law abiding citizen why would you need access to a gun?
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All across the nation, there are many people who have guns illegally, and there are as well many people who have them legally. There are some people who use guns for acceptable reasons like to give them piece of mind, but there are others that have them for the intention of hurting or killing someone, some people may even have them for both. Guns should be banned, it's polluting the minds of young children with the ideas of violence. Maybe that's why today's society is having a growing violence rate. We are showing today adolescence that guns and violence are okay by giving them video games and TV shows that are promoting it. Today's gun owners do not respect the all rules and laws that come with owning a gun. If you are truly a law abiding citizen, what should you need access to a gun for?