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Rainshine

  • 2 years ago

Do you like my song lyrics? Any suggestions for improving? Here they are: Come back home.I made mistakes. I’ll live again. Time moves slowly. I forget why you left. I don’t know why I care. Live again. To live – life is a mystery. I hardly realize I breathe. Suffocated. When I forgot myself you’d remember me. Now you’re gone. Now I’m lost. Yet I know exactly where I am. Come back home. Pray remember me. Regrets. That’s all I’m left with. Live your life. Have your dream. I’m stuck remembering the memories. Bittersweet. Now you've left me. Sure I was wrong. I made mistakes. You were the only thing that kept me going. You’re my life. And now that the memories are fading… What have I left to live for. Come back home. Before I make my last mistake. Kind of a pop/folk/electronic tune. I really don't know.

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  1. Danyelle222
    • 2 years ago
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    yeah there good!

  2. Rainshine
    • 2 years ago
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    Thanks!

  3. kendra11033
    • 2 years ago
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    its really good :) is that the whole song , or just the first verse??

  4. kenziejo1998
    • 2 years ago
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    very good

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