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orion92898

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This is my 2nd poem! Rapunzel!

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  1. orion92898
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    The walls of my tower Get taller by the hour Waiting for my Prince Charming It is alarming How long it is taking. I am shaking My fears take over And then it is all over. I have no chance To dance With the man of my dreams I wish he could hear mt screams I know there are plenty. My mind is bending My life is pending Waiting for you to come Then I will know you are the one.

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    @csscgirl @AuroraB @secret66 @djcool31 @Glizzy_Nedd @Warriorslayer @kewlgeek555 @bakonloverk @madeline.grey @kmacdaddy

  3. orion92898
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    @Destinymasha

  4. orion92898
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    Tell me what you think please!

  5. secret66
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    Awesome! You are a great Writer!!!! :D

  6. orion92898
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    :} DDD Thank you!

  7. csscgirl
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    amazing :) @hba

  8. Destinymasha
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    I'd better take my eyes off --before I become even more jealous :D -its awesome

  9. orion92898
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    :} DDDDDDD Ermigrd I can't believe that you like it!!!

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    @thomaster @TheCatMan

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    @GeekyChick

  12. madeline.grey
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    haha that was really good! and i LOVE RAPUNZEL OMG

  13. orion92898
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    :} D Love you girl!

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    @kawaiicat123

  15. kawaiicat123
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    I love it :)

  16. orion92898
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    thank you :} DDDD

  17. orion92898
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    @justnick09

  18. justnick09
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    i like this one:) great job, it rhymed but you still kept a nice story

  19. orion92898
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    :} D thank yous!

  20. Warriorslayer
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    good job

  21. orion92898
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    : *

  22. MathGirl12
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    you are an awesome writer i wish i could write like you.

  23. orion92898
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    You can do anything you set your mind to.

  24. MathGirl12
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    i know i have try to write songs and story and more but it never works

  25. orion92898
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    Do you want to read my book? I started to write it and I am starting on chapter 2.

  26. MathGirl12
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    no i do not think so

  27. orion92898
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    Okay sorry...

  28. MathGirl12
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    i was not being mean if that is what thinking if so i am sorry if that is what you were thinking

  29. orion92898
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    Tis alrite.. If you don't mind me asking why don't you wanna read it?

  30. MathGirl12
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    i have not seen it. i am new on here so if you can tell me and i could read it i just need to know the name of it

  31. MathGirl12
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    you and me should talk by message that why not every one can see what we are talking about

  32. jennaknight03
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    awesome can you look at my poem??

  33. orion92898
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    yes

  34. jennaknight03
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    ok be anent is is my first peom ever, History is always a mystery who knows what you are going to learn in history is it a amazing subject. History should be everyones favorite subjects

  35. orion92898
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    ummmmmm do you want me to be completely honest?

  36. jennaknight03
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    yes

  37. orion92898
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    okay well that poem is very opinionated and.....what grade are you in before i go on?

  38. jennaknight03
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    I am in 7th grade but i have never done poems before so i can take anything

  39. orion92898
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    okay well first of all all poems should be posted in verse. and I think that 1/2 of the words in there are History..

  40. jennaknight03
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    kk

  41. orion92898
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    um could you retype it for me in verse it will be easier to read..

  42. jennaknight03
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    here, History is always a mystery who knows what you are going to learn in history is it a amazing subject. History should be everyones favorite subjects

  43. orion92898
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    that isn't in verse let me do it for you: History is always a mystery Who knows what you are going to learn in History It is an amazing subject. History should be everyones favorite subjects.

  44. jennaknight03
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    oh ok thanks

  45. orion92898
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    yah so that is the definition of in verse what you did before was paragraph form..

  46. jennaknight03
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    anything else?

  47. orion92898
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    AND!!! you rhymed subject with subjects!

  48. jennaknight03
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    oh ok

  49. jennaknight03
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    can you do one that is cinderella when you get there?

  50. orion92898
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    sorry if I was being to hard on you but I think you can do better..

  51. orion92898
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    huh what was that last thing?

  52. jennaknight03
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    yea i know but i was ceryous because in history i got 2 place for best poem

  53. jennaknight03
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    that was all

  54. orion92898
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    what did you mean by 'can you do one that is cinderella when you get there?'?

  55. jennaknight03
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    When you write your next poem can it be cinderella?

  56. jennaknight03
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    is what i meant

  57. orion92898
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    I will try to come up with something..

  58. jennaknight03
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    ok great thanks for fixing mine

  59. orion92898
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    message me when you fix it tho!

  60. jennaknight03
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    kk

  61. jennaknight03
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    what school do you go to?

  62. orion92898
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    Penn Foster Homeschool.

  63. jennaknight03
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    i go to k12 online school

  64. orion92898
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    Cool how old are you?

  65. jennaknight03
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    do you know any chat sites and i am 10 and in 7th gras almost done with that you?

  66. jennaknight03
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    oh and you were not harsh at all

  67. orion92898
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    wow you are farther ahead than me..I am 14 and in 11th grade.

  68. orion92898
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    :} D

  69. jennaknight03
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    do you low any chat sites so we can get to know each other?

  70. orion92898
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    no but we can message on OS.

  71. jennaknight03
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    yea we can let me google it

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