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Destinyyyy

  • one year ago

Can someone please proofread what I have so far? I need to fix the thesis statement I have and create a conclusion. (500-700 words; third person objective view)

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  1. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    My assignment says this for the thesis statement -- It should included your subjective definition of the topic (your focus) as well as include a preview of the two areas you will use for development of your two body paragraphs.

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    hey can you check out my song?

  3. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Umm sure

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    it looks good

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    very women impowering

  6. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Thank you.. But I need my thesis fixed and a conclusion :/

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    cool

  8. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    so any advice other than what you said about my song

  9. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    I dont know much about songs

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