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anonymous
 one year ago
This is my first song that I really feel has potential. Opinions? Song is in the comments box. (I have not recorded it yet I would just like to know opinions on lyrics!)
anonymous
 one year ago
This is my first song that I really feel has potential. Opinions? Song is in the comments box. (I have not recorded it yet I would just like to know opinions on lyrics!)

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anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0All alone in the darkness afraid to open up my eyes. This feeling inside no I cannot shake, for I am afraid that I might realize, that it's a dream. For I might realize that it's just a dream. And when I realize that it's not a dream, it starts to scare me yeah, it really scares me. 'Cause I'm just a child. Trapped in this nightmarish dream. Or is it real? Or is it real? Or is it real?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I really like it! If you can you should keep going with it. Did you draw or make that picture?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0no i did not but i could if i wanted to

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0so i need to make it longer but other than that advice peps?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Oh okay.. Id have more of an opinion if I could hear someone singing it

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0how would i record it?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0You said above that you haven't recorded it yet..?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but i think that i didn't read your entire essay

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0So when you do you could youtube or something them post the link on here for people to listen and give opinions.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok cool imma finish reading your essay

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0What part did you not read? I have three paragraphs

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh i thought it was three pgs

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Nope.. Any advise on a conclusion :/

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0for the conclusion restate the main idea

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Easier said then done

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0What to write after that

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but you have a new fan

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0you need a comma after short

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0other than that i'd say it was beautiful

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Okay.. Anything else? And is yourself okay to say when an essay is in 3rd person point of view?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ya i mean i have no problem with it =D

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Okay thank you :) .. If you add more to your song Id love to read it

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ok cool thx for your imput

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@JellyCakes love it :D

YoungStudier
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0That's a nice song.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0thank you i think it needs a little work tho

YoungStudier
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Meh, I suppose. I honestly couldn't give you any constructive criticism on it, but I suppose a few tweaks here and there and it'll be perfect. Keep at it! ^_^

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0thank you for your opinion!!!

YoungStudier
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0You're Welcome! ^_^

Afrodiddle
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0you might want to put it in the music section, a lot of good song writers are in there who could help you.

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0thank you for your advise!!! :)

Afrodiddle
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Most of them are rappers though, so watch out. :P

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0thank you @MAkaylabvb

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i thought that it was a great song and u should write more

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@jellycakes can you write music and have you written the music for it yet. Because honestly if you havent or dont know how it prob will never be a song but forever in the form of a poem

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0do you want to work as a song wrighter for my band?

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i like it but i think it is about someone lost not in a dream but in life itself

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0plus i think it is beautiful and "Or is it real,is it real, is it real" should be the chores

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@MAkaylabvb yes i would like that. idk if i would be any good but i can try

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0thank you for your feed back @freeG13

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0welcome thx you for being an awesome songwriter/maybe singer @JellyCakes

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i am only a 6th grader so...

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.08th grader plus in K12 online school

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I think it is a slow song but in the chores it goes a little faster then back to slow maybe a duet

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0do you play an instrument?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0@freeG13 i just went to eat dinner and you blocked me...

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i do not play an instrument but if i do next year i will play a wind instrument

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i meant i will be a 6th grader next year

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0can u unblock me plz?

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0and what school are you in?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i was in k12 like you but i am going to a traditional middle school next year. i was in this thing called blinded learning and they worked with k12

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh thank you. i like urs

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0wait if you didn't block me then wt happened?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0it says "This user does not accept messages."

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh i was going to tell u i can sing.

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh sorry wait one minute

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh sorry wait one minute

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0when i was in 4th grade i got my own solo and this year i got a solo. but i mainly sing in my free time when no one is around.

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0yea me too and is this better?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0thank you but what happened?

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0so are you on facebook?

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0um on my profile i thought i was going to have notified emails and well ya

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh ok that happened to me i understand wt happened

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but hey what do you think if the song is turned into a doet

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0it was annoying i was just minding my own business and it was like "verify your email" *doomy voice*

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i don't know i think it would become confusing because of what the song is about

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0if it were a duet i just don't feel like it would have the feeling that i won't it to have

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0ya maybe your right it is your song :) ;) :)

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0so hey what do you look like?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0well i do appreciate the fact that you are trying to help instead of saying "ya it was good i liked it" or something like that and thank you for correcting me i am just tired and it is summer and i just didn't rly want to think

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0um what do i like?...

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what do u mean like songs? fav color? fav pet?

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0what do you LOOK LIKE?

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0oh LOOK LIKE? oh i have brown hair glasses um...

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0brown skin like caramel

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0that about sums me up

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0i look like the profile picture on the left with the peach

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0hey could you hold on a sec my mom wants me to put away dinner. brb

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0but say what you were going to say then i will go

freeG13
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0thanks it was like last year though

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0Thank you guys so much for supporting me. I l<3 ve you guys!

anonymous
 one year ago
Best ResponseYou've already chosen the best response.0I also thank you for giving me advise!
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