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That was amazing! I didn't see anything wrong!
Oh thank you.. Any ideas on where I can add 172 words??
Not really :/ Can I get a medal?
i like it @Destinyyyy
can u help me plz
Thank you.. Did you see anywhere that I could add more words?
Sorry but im not good with poems.. At all :/
um no actually i think it's great the way it is but i can read it over if u want add see if u can
Please if you could that would be great. I have to add 172
ok and can u help me
I can try but im horrible with poems. I dont understand them
Do you have any ideas on what you want it to be about?
If you find somewhere to add a word can you put something in front of it so I know its a new word
um bout the sun
hella bomb conclusion! Well done!
Thank you :) I need more words though
hey so did the restating the main idea for the conclusion advice help??
Kind of lol
can i have a medal?? for helping destinyyyy?
Yes sorry I thought I did already
@nanc888 do you see anywhere that I can add 172 words?
I honestly liked it and I think its great the way it is but if you need to add more words, you can probably add more specific details. If you can do you think you can help me
sorry i wasn't much help
I can try to help you.. Could you help me with the thesis.. I think I did mine wrong. The teacher wants this -- It should include your subjective definition of the topic (your focus) as well as include a preview of the two areas you will use for the development of your two body paragraphs.
okay ill try. @Destinyyyy