sanra123
  • sanra123
can someone correct my argumentative essay
English
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schrodinger
  • schrodinger
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anonymous
  • anonymous
Where is it? I will be on most of the day... I cannot answer it but I can give you Ideas to complete it.
sanra123
  • sanra123
no i need someone to check my essay not to complete it
anonymous
  • anonymous
Okay...ok

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sanra123
  • sanra123
thanks a lot
anonymous
  • anonymous
Looks fine to me and I am great at essay's...Just skimming through it gives me tears of joy... :)::::: What do you think is wrong with it?
anonymous
  • anonymous
@sanra123
anonymous
  • anonymous
?
sanra123
  • sanra123
i think the conclusion isn't summing my essay
sanra123
  • sanra123
i just want u to look for sentence fluency
sanra123
  • sanra123
and grammer and punctuation
anonymous
  • anonymous
OK...It will take awhile...But it looks fine to me.
sanra123
  • sanra123
ok thank u
anonymous
  • anonymous
I just finished it ''fast reader'' and your punctuation is perfect, all of the commas are in the right place. Your sentence fluency is fine, i'd just try to work on the run-on sentences by shortening them, and erasing words that are not needed.
sanra123
  • sanra123
thanks a lot cause in my conclusion my friend told me i have long sentences
anonymous
  • anonymous
When I typed ''fast reader'' I almost typed ''fat reader'' I can't stop laughing at that.
sanra123
  • sanra123
hahahahahhahahahha
anonymous
  • anonymous
Its OK when formal writers like you, try too hard to be exact, the words kind of come out wrong. But I loved it nonetheless.
sanra123
  • sanra123
thanks a lot for your encouragement
sanra123
  • sanra123
@BasilisHolmes33 did u correct it?
sanra123
  • sanra123
@BasilisHolmes33
sanra123
  • sanra123
@skullpatrol
gamer56
  • gamer56
Looks good to me :)
sanra123
  • sanra123
really
sanra123
  • sanra123
can u correct my conclusion
sanra123
  • sanra123
@gamer56
gamer56
  • gamer56
@Catseyeglint911 I think this person can help you better with that, Then i can.
anonymous
  • anonymous
@gamer56 i know right it looks amazing.
sanra123
  • sanra123
thanks a lot but i think it needs to be fixed or not?

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