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sanra123

  • one year ago

can someone correct my argumentative essay

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Where is it? I will be on most of the day... I cannot answer it but I can give you Ideas to complete it.

  2. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    no i need someone to check my essay not to complete it

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Okay...ok

  4. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    thanks a lot

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Looks fine to me and I am great at essay's...Just skimming through it gives me tears of joy... :)::::: What do you think is wrong with it?

  6. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @sanra123

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    ?

  8. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    i think the conclusion isn't summing my essay

  9. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    i just want u to look for sentence fluency

  10. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    and grammer and punctuation

  11. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    OK...It will take awhile...But it looks fine to me.

  12. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    ok thank u

  13. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I just finished it ''fast reader'' and your punctuation is perfect, all of the commas are in the right place. Your sentence fluency is fine, i'd just try to work on the run-on sentences by shortening them, and erasing words that are not needed.

  14. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    thanks a lot cause in my conclusion my friend told me i have long sentences

  15. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    When I typed ''fast reader'' I almost typed ''fat reader'' I can't stop laughing at that.

  16. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    hahahahahhahahahha

  17. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Its OK when formal writers like you, try too hard to be exact, the words kind of come out wrong. But I loved it nonetheless.

  18. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    thanks a lot for your encouragement

  19. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    @BasilisHolmes33 did u correct it?

  20. sanra123
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    @BasilisHolmes33

  21. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    @skullpatrol

  22. Gamer56
    • one year ago
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    Looks good to me :)

  23. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    really

  24. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    can u correct my conclusion

  25. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    @gamer56

  26. Gamer56
    • one year ago
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    @Catseyeglint911 I think this person can help you better with that, Then i can.

  27. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @gamer56 i know right it looks amazing.

  28. sanra123
    • one year ago
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    thanks a lot but i think it needs to be fixed or not?

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