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poem please give honest opinions and responses

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  1. anonymous
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    We can let the world control us But who wants to live the life of another man’s hypocrisy? It’s a fight to be ourselves in a world where we’re told to be anything else. And its hard to do this. not because of the battle scars But because were trying to fight for someone that we’re still figuring out. How are you supposed to fight for the unknown? It’s easier to be told who we are Than to figure it out ourselves. So sometimes we give in and sometimes were on a quest With endless battles. We have to fight devils of the world as much as ourselves. Even the desert gets in the way. But still we have to keep fighting Because if not, what do we have left? Its not hard for someone to take what you barely had. Which is why we build a stronger grip. Because fighting endless battles Is better than giving into someone else’s insecurities So you can just be a trophy for their claim. I am not a court gesture for the queen of hearts. Because I have my own heart to save. And so do you. We cannot be ourselves in the shadows of someone else. We can only hope to figure it out and dream. Create a vision, imagine that vision, but don’t forget to pursue it. Or else you’re just another pedestal for the queens and kings of the world.

  2. anonymous
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    @1DISAMAZING2345 @77777jeannie77777 @chainedecho @cupcakerain @JackofallTradez @rikkibracamonte1999

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Your incredible!! I love this so much!!!

  4. anonymous
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    I love what you write. It's amazing!!!

  5. bakonloverk
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    It's really good :) I like it

  6. anonymous
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    @rikkibracamonte1999 lol thank you so much

  7. anonymous
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    @bakonloverk im so glad thanks

  8. anonymous
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    @HWBUSTER00 @leahhhmorgannn @Slacker @sugarplum15

  9. anonymous
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    You're best work yet!

  10. anonymous
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    @Slacker lol thanks

  11. anonymous
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    @butterflydreamer @fallenangelorchid @k_lynn @sugarplum15 @teresar7

  12. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    i love it! its so true, and the words r powerful. i would love to hear more from you!

  13. anonymous
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    @teresar7 lol thanks im so glad

  14. anonymous
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    My biggest worry is that it might be a little cliche

  15. teresar7
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    its my pleasure!

  16. geneticrockhopper247
    • one year ago
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    I don't think you need to worry about this being cliche. While yes, fighting against the world is something that is frequently addressed in writing, you tackle the topic well and originally. Well done.

  17. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @geneticrockhopper247 thank you

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