anonymous
  • anonymous
Could I get some assistance with writing my essay? I'm a bit stumped at how to support my claims with 3rd party evidence (and a few other problems)
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anonymous
  • anonymous
@anna1448 here is the link to my essay https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ViHTllzmy50NIm4cJ2doxrzzd4-q4d9h5e7Q0W15a6M/edit?usp=sharing

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anonymous
  • anonymous
I just need some ideas bounced off to figure out how to fix the problems my teacher highlighted for me in my writing.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
opp xD thanks... this is quite helpful being that i was just about to ask you for it :)
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
ok I'll see what i can do to help
anonymous
  • anonymous
thanks :)
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
no prob
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
ummmm let me see.....im still trying to find some ways to fix ur essay but im quite impressed :) it seems really well written tbh :) so in advance well done
anonymous
  • anonymous
:0 thanks. I'm not very good at writing though lol.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
lol yes you are xD better than what i can do :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
:0 I hadn't really thought about it. I am in a college class though so I suppose it might be a little more advanced than high school writing.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
woah xD thats awesome :)
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
The video game industry heavily relies on sequels much like Hollywood does. <----- this apparently needs to have more detail :) but i guess ur working on that now
anonymous
  • anonymous
I'm a bit lost on how to tie it into that actually. I had a really difficult time picking a topic for this paper lol. Cause I'm supposed to back it up with 3rd party evidence but finding evidence can be quite daunting at times.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
very true xD im having trouble with writing myself but it's nowhere near as complicated as your paper
anonymous
  • anonymous
:) If I end up finishing this today and you need help I can try helping you out if you need it.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
thank you but i couldn't ask you to do that for me xD
anonymous
  • anonymous
I wouldn't mind :D
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
ok xD how about i let u know if i need help later? deal?
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sure :)
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
cool xD
anonymous
  • anonymous
Do you happen to know of any articles or other reliable sources like IGN or something to back up my essay?
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
no but i can look that up :]
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay tenx :o ur mah best buddy now xD
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
yeyyyyy :D
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
# 1. www.gametrailers.com # 2. www.gamespot.com ok so i guess these are similar to IGN :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
:o Oh I meant like actual articles that have been written that I could refer to. That's okay though :) thank you for looking.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
opp im horrible at helping xD im sorry
anonymous
  • anonymous
It's okay :) I know you're trying that's all that really matters to me. You have any ideas on how I could shorten my quotes?
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
it looks like u already shortened it xD
anonymous
  • anonymous
Nupe I haven't touched any of the quotes.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
oh wait nvm i was looking at the wrong part of the essay xD
anonymous
  • anonymous
x) lawl
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
ok you could use lead in "... and leading out ... " to indicate that this is the relevant piece that was picked out of the quote.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Do you perhaps have an example? (I'm not really sure what specific section of the paper you are referring to.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
it could be any quote but for example this quote ---->"the lack of originality reflects the game industry's growing maturity. Because of the technological complexity of the current generation of console game devices, development costs have sharply risen. A top-shelf video game now typically costs $5 million to $15 million to create. As a result, game publishers who produce titles for consoles like Microsoft's Xbox, the Sony PlayStation 2 and Nintendo's GameCube (which account for 80 percent of all game revenue) have been increasingly unwilling to place bets on original, unproved material and, like Hollywood, rely on new versions of previous hits.” :) you could choose certain parts of this quote that is of actual use to u....just don't ever paraphrase a quote xD so that should help shorten some of the quotes
anonymous
  • anonymous
ohhhhh so you're saying like...I should break it up into smaller segments? and try cutting out things I don't need from it.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
yeah :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
okay I'll try that :D
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
cool :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Well I think this is going to take me all day long, however if you ever need any assistance yourself Anna, don't hesitate to ask me for help! :) If you ever need help shoot me an email me here: keanujonesarea@gmail.com
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you for your time by the way. You helped me tremendously.
Anna1448
  • Anna1448
oh goodness xD i don't think i was much help but ur welcome :) and thank you as well
anonymous
  • anonymous
Sorry I just now saw this, I hope you did well on your essay!

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