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@sugarplum15 @Spyro517 @ispike @nechirwan @Nerdgirl @Nnesha
so its an outline on the attack on pearl harbor. Now I have all the information, I know where I want it to go, and I have the first part of the outline done I just need everything to go in the outline.
is this what you need help with
what do you mean you need everything to go in the outline
did you do your introduction yet
ok i will be back in 30 minutes because i have class right now thank you bye!!!!
ok i dont have to go to class so i am back
c'mon talk to me so i can help
ok if you don't type i cant help you
ok yes i have all my intro
ok bye i have to help people in their questions next time you should respond to people so they can help you
and when i say i need everything in the outline i mean all my info needs to go into the outline
im sorry my pc had crashed
oh it is ok
do you have your introduction done
yes except for the background part
do you want to see it
you dont need to put that for 1.B.
what do you mean
what do you mean @owllover101
i mean what do you mean this is what you said: Background information connecting the reader to the subject
look i am so sorry i have to go
How much of this outline did you get done?
just the intro
Oh. How long does it have to be?
I. Introduction A. Attention-getter B. Background information connecting the reader to the subject C. Thesis: (write the complete thesis statement) II. Category 1 (change this to the actual name of category): topic sentence A. First point 1. Supporting evidence—quote, paraphrase, or detail 2. Another piece of supporting evidence B. Second point 1. Supporting evidence 2. Supporting evidence C. Third point (Same as above) III. Category 2: topic sentence A. First point 1. Supporting evidence 2. Supporting evidence B. Second point IV. Category 3: topic sentence V. Conclusion Your sub points for the conclusion to wrap up the overarching
Well for the first one, I'd pick A. It seems the simplest. Try connecting the reader to the situation. Do something like "Unequipped and unprepared, you run without aim. Searching for any sign of life left over from this feast of violence and dismay."
Oh wait. That's the introduction. Neve rmind then.
i have all the information i just need it in the outline and i know where i want the info
Ok. So what's the information that you have?