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  • one year ago

poem critic honest feed back please

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I am afraid of the light as much as I am the dark. People seem to be so scared of the middle, That they go from one extreme to the next. No one likes in between. But isn’t it all in between. I mean, good and evil is just a matter of perception. A concreate ideal created by the hypocrites of the world. But who’s to say what’s good is actually good? Good and evil persists of the idea of perfection, And let’s be honest perfection can’t exist. Because perfection is seen in a numerous number of ways. So many that contradicts each other. Who’s right? And who’s to say that they’re right? …maybe we’re all wrong. Maybe there is no good or evil. There’s just people and opinions, Voices. Which is why we need to stop worrying about concepts That only making us hypocrites! Use your voice, better the world But don’t try to perfect it, Because that’ a battle we will all lose.

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    This is beautiful!! :)

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @sugarplum15 thanks i wasnt quite sure if i wanted to make it an article or a poem but i think i made the right decision by making it a poem

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Yeah. :)

  5. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    i love it!

  6. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @teresar7 lol i think you say that every time haha. Thanks

  7. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    well, it is really good! its better then i can do lol i love it!

  8. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    No matter what you write, you always somehow amaze me with your writing. :D

  9. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    lol every time i see ur piece of writing, i like it.

  10. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @rikkibracamonte1999 lol im so glad thank you so much

  11. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @teresar7 haha thanks

  12. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    np anytime!

  13. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    Wow this is very well written

  14. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @horsegirl27 thanks

  15. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    yw

  16. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @chainedecho

  17. rvc
    • one year ago
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    nice :)

  18. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @rvc thanks

  19. anonymous
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    @ahvei @DominantVampire

  20. DominantVampire
    • one year ago
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    indeed it is good.

  21. anonymous
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    @DominantVampire thanks

  22. rvc
    • one year ago
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    Thank you @ispike

  23. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @rvc for what

  24. rvc
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    haha u said thank you so Thank you :)

  25. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I really like this one!

  26. Crissy15
    • one year ago
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    I like it yea perfection doesn't exist, if it did my mom would've demanded it everyday lol

  27. anonymous
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    @Slacker thanks

  28. anonymous
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    @Crissy15 glad you liked it

  29. anonymous
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    @inowalst @HWBUSTER00 @demonickittenlover @ZaneMarcs

  30. geneticrockhopper247
    • one year ago
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    Honestly, I am philosophically torn on this poem. Artistically, I love it. However, I vacillate between the support of definitive right and wrong for the pure fact that moral relativism merely doesn't work, and the overarching concept that pure right isn't possible, so why bother. So, I like it, I'm just not 100% sure that I agree with it.

  31. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    amazing i love it

  32. anonymous
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    @MAkaylabvb so glad

  33. anonymous
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    @ispike its amazing comming from a wrighter i love it you could turn it in to a song

  34. anonymous
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    @MAkaylabvb yea if only i could write music

  35. anonymous
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    @ispike you can just fallow your heart and dont think

  36. anonymous
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    @MAkaylabvb i can write lyrics but a song will just sit in the dark if you dont know how to write music. I want to learn i can read it a bit but i still have to learn to write

  37. anonymous
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    @demonchild99 @kittycat123

  38. anonymous
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    @ispike ok well im looking for a lyric wrighter for my band if your intrested message me its a metalcore/alternative rock/emo band

  39. anonymous
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    @MAkaylabvb I'm more into broadway music and slightly pop than rock

  40. demonchild99
    • one year ago
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    lol...amazing ispike

  41. anonymous
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    i dont think it would be a good fit but thanks for the offer

  42. anonymous
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    @demonchild99 thanks

  43. anonymous
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    @ispike ok well if you ever want to you can allways message me :)

  44. anonymous
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    @MAkaylabvb thanks

  45. anonymous
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    @ispike its still good

  46. Babynini
    • one year ago
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    Woah. I like. Two small things: 1) on the fifth line don't forget a question mark " But isn’t it all in between." should be: " But isn’t it all in between?" 2) On the last line you forgot an s "Because that’ a battle we will all lose." should be: "Because that’s a battle we will all lose." This is the first time I don't have anything to say besides punctuation and a small edit! Well done, i'm a tough grader :)

  47. anonymous
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    @babynini thanks i will fix that

  48. anonymous
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    this is a great poem!

  49. anonymous
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    One word... Amazing! :P

  50. anonymous
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    @ladyjay26 thanks

  51. anonymous
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    @studybuggtori thanks

  52. anonymous
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    @ispike No problem! Feel free to tag me in anymore poems you post!

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