anonymous
  • anonymous
poem critic honest feed back please
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anonymous
  • anonymous
I am afraid of the light as much as I am the dark. People seem to be so scared of the middle, That they go from one extreme to the next. No one likes in between. But isn’t it all in between. I mean, good and evil is just a matter of perception. A concreate ideal created by the hypocrites of the world. But who’s to say what’s good is actually good? Good and evil persists of the idea of perfection, And let’s be honest perfection can’t exist. Because perfection is seen in a numerous number of ways. So many that contradicts each other. Who’s right? And who’s to say that they’re right? …maybe we’re all wrong. Maybe there is no good or evil. There’s just people and opinions, Voices. Which is why we need to stop worrying about concepts That only making us hypocrites! Use your voice, better the world But don’t try to perfect it, Because that’ a battle we will all lose.
anonymous
  • anonymous
This is beautiful!! :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
@sugarplum15 thanks i wasnt quite sure if i wanted to make it an article or a poem but i think i made the right decision by making it a poem

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anonymous
  • anonymous
Yeah. :)
teresar7
  • teresar7
i love it!
anonymous
  • anonymous
@teresar7 lol i think you say that every time haha. Thanks
teresar7
  • teresar7
well, it is really good! its better then i can do lol i love it!
anonymous
  • anonymous
No matter what you write, you always somehow amaze me with your writing. :D
teresar7
  • teresar7
lol every time i see ur piece of writing, i like it.
anonymous
  • anonymous
@rikkibracamonte1999 lol im so glad thank you so much
anonymous
  • anonymous
@teresar7 haha thanks
teresar7
  • teresar7
np anytime!
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
Wow this is very well written
anonymous
  • anonymous
@horsegirl27 thanks
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
yw
anonymous
  • anonymous
@chainedecho
rvc
  • rvc
nice :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
@rvc thanks
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ahvei @DominantVampire
DominantVampire
  • DominantVampire
indeed it is good.
anonymous
  • anonymous
@DominantVampire thanks
rvc
  • rvc
Thank you @ispike
anonymous
  • anonymous
@rvc for what
rvc
  • rvc
haha u said thank you so Thank you :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
I really like this one!
Crissy15
  • Crissy15
I like it yea perfection doesn't exist, if it did my mom would've demanded it everyday lol
anonymous
  • anonymous
@Slacker thanks
anonymous
  • anonymous
@Crissy15 glad you liked it
anonymous
  • anonymous
@inowalst @HWBUSTER00 @demonickittenlover @ZaneMarcs
geneticrockhopper247
  • geneticrockhopper247
Honestly, I am philosophically torn on this poem. Artistically, I love it. However, I vacillate between the support of definitive right and wrong for the pure fact that moral relativism merely doesn't work, and the overarching concept that pure right isn't possible, so why bother. So, I like it, I'm just not 100% sure that I agree with it.
anonymous
  • anonymous
amazing i love it
anonymous
  • anonymous
@MAkaylabvb so glad
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ispike its amazing comming from a wrighter i love it you could turn it in to a song
anonymous
  • anonymous
@MAkaylabvb yea if only i could write music
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ispike you can just fallow your heart and dont think
anonymous
  • anonymous
@MAkaylabvb i can write lyrics but a song will just sit in the dark if you dont know how to write music. I want to learn i can read it a bit but i still have to learn to write
anonymous
  • anonymous
@demonchild99 @kittycat123
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ispike ok well im looking for a lyric wrighter for my band if your intrested message me its a metalcore/alternative rock/emo band
anonymous
  • anonymous
@MAkaylabvb I'm more into broadway music and slightly pop than rock
demonchild99
  • demonchild99
lol...amazing ispike
anonymous
  • anonymous
i dont think it would be a good fit but thanks for the offer
anonymous
  • anonymous
@demonchild99 thanks
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ispike ok well if you ever want to you can allways message me :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
@MAkaylabvb thanks
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ispike its still good
Babynini
  • Babynini
Woah. I like. Two small things: 1) on the fifth line don't forget a question mark " But isn’t it all in between." should be: " But isn’t it all in between?" 2) On the last line you forgot an s "Because that’ a battle we will all lose." should be: "Because that’s a battle we will all lose." This is the first time I don't have anything to say besides punctuation and a small edit! Well done, i'm a tough grader :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
@babynini thanks i will fix that
anonymous
  • anonymous
this is a great poem!
anonymous
  • anonymous
One word... Amazing! :P
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ladyjay26 thanks
anonymous
  • anonymous
@studybuggtori thanks
anonymous
  • anonymous
@ispike No problem! Feel free to tag me in anymore poems you post!

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