So basically I am writting a essay on injustice issue which I choose is racial discrimination
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Quit mass tagging
what do you need help in?
I need help with my thesis statement
Well i can help you.
Please Don't Include Me In Your Mass Tagging.
First, you must WRITE a theses statement. Go!! Many can help after that. None can help before that. It must be YOUR thesis statement.
Can someone plz help me with my essay
You're not listening.
hey I already find the thesis statement
"Find"? What does that even mean? Did you write one or didn't you? Have you something meaningful to talk about? There is not a recipe. What do YOU think? Start writing. It doesn't matter even if garbage comes out. You can fix it, later. Just start writing!!
but do you have any email account where I will show u my thesis
No, that will not be happening.
If you can post pertinent excerpts, that might be fine, here.
ok so my first thesis statement be The racism is what create a negative effects on the people of different cultures
Is it be right
but My essay is quite different I guess but Idk how to show you
I try to attach a file but its not working Idk why
that's why I just ask for your email address
is anyone here who can help me with my essay structure
You must communicate parts of it. You can't just beg and shout.
do you look at my thesis
ok so my first THESIS STATEMENT be The racism is what create a negative effects on the people of different cultures
@tkhunny I know you can't help me
Thesis statement: Blah blah blah because of Reason, Reason2, and Reason3. Your thesis statement is lacking reasons. T. Khunny can help and attempt you help but refused to utilize his help.
@GreenCat i never refused his help thou
I think he don't have any idea what to write
He tried to but you refused his help so he stopped. A wise man knows a hopeless case when he sees one.
first of all he tell me to creat my own thesis statement but when i type here then he never reply
i don't call it help thou
In this case, it was hopeless trying to get you to accept his help.
i also pm him but he never reply
i try to take his help but he don't even write a single commant on my thesis statement
its not a help @GreenCat
can someone plz help me
@MTALHAHASSAN2 first off this needs to be in writing and second people can NOT help with this kind of stuff because its YOUR thesis not someone elses so people can not help with this oh and don't mass tag people its against the CoC
@xX_GamerGirl_Xx hey dear I know they can't help me with it but they can also give me some suggestions
Taking suggestion is also against law
well i guess you are right so ok then what are u spose to write about maybe i can help?
taking help with essay structure is also against law
If u help me with structure then that be great
I want to attach a document here but its not working
do you have a any social website where I can send you that
oh just click [Attach File] button that should work and if that doesnt work u can send it my email or something
I try to do that but its not working Idk why
I will send u on ur email
wait just copy and paste this we can use that : https://titanpad.com/hwkprOk2vP
ok sure and thnx
no problem! :D
lol how can we use that
lol just copy and paste what ever u r trying to show me
but its a pic
Not being rude - just honest and direct. "one of the most" doesn't mean anything. "terrible problems" -- Is there a list of these? This is histrionics. "racial discrimination" = "judge by skin color" -- That's just not correct. There are Pacific Islanders far darker than many Africans. Okay, you start talking about "Racial" discrimination, but immediately branch out to color, nationality, and ethnicity. Very confusing. Also, "descent" is the same as "racial". Calling it something else doesn't make it two things. "spread like a deadly virus" -- You'll have to prove that. Racism began with slave trade? -- Very doubtful. Rethink this point. You are entirely overlooking what I said early. There ARE good reasons to differentiate by race. Medical History is one of them. You are saying that all doctors will eventually feel bad because they have extracted a good family history. This is simply false. These doctors should be thanked for doing their jobs correctly. You MUST be more specific when speaking of discrimination. It is NOT a blanket event. You seem to be jumping time periods. When was the last time you saw a Whites Only public restroom? "causes a lot of big problems" -- This means nothing. What problems? Is there actually a link? You can say something meaningful, but so far, you are just spewing vague and general ideas in the hope that your reader will feel bad. Present FACTS! Use meaningful words and phrases. The current trend in U.S. Elementary Education is to get students to use inflammatory language in the hope of awakening people to action. I think this is horrible. I think we should tell people the truth and back it up with evidence. Trust people to understand when you explain clearly. My views. I welcome others'.
^Yes; support your reasoning with examples.
so basically these two pics which I want to share with u
The first tell the essay structure and in second there are just the topics
plz look at two pics
it may help u
do you look at eassy structure
ok lets go on the essay
are you there
ok so let gt start
do you read my essay
ok take ur time
u need help with conclusion taking 2 long sorry done
so is it fine
nope first i need to finish my body paragraphs
yeah why would i lie 2 you just need 2 spell some words right and re place them i can do that 4 u
i can just fix it or what ?
but i don't finish the body paragraphs yet
yeah fix there
do i have to enter my name don't mind is that apart of it
just write ur name
lol just write any name
can i do my real one
where u get this information from can yo also send me the link
i did the same essay
do you have it
can i see
know whs=at they mean by effect on human dignity
what type it up
do you look at my essay structure its given there
look at it again
is this the rules for your essay
This all detail required
i mean for my essay
well i read the rules and essay so technically nothing is wrong w/ your essa y i know its your essay cause i didn't post mine
but i want to see urs
are we gonna do the essay
lets do it
are you there
so are u gonna look at my essay or we can do u
First lets finish that essay
its fine i corrected every thing that was wrong
bro look at the chat box
the first link that i clicked on like u said why
are you on the essay page
see there is chat
but i don't see any thing
ok just show me ur essay
@KyanTheDoodle Can you plz look at the pic which is above there
Wait. I thought I was just helping fix grammatical errors.
can someone plz look at my essay plz
do I fulfill my all essay requirnments Here is the list of the requirnments http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/556e7d0de4b050a18e84732a-mtalhahassan2-1433570241048-20150603_000033.jpg
u blocked me
@GreenCat Can you plz look at my essay
racism is what creates a negative effect on the people of many different cultures. Its your Thesis statement but just a little detailing.
check this one
I change some things
i actually think thats really good.
Here is a link of requirnment which I need for my essay http://assets.openstudy.com/updates/attachments/556e7d0de4b050a18e84732a-mtalhahassan2-1433570241048-20150603_000033.jpg
i cant really see it...
@tkhunny can you plz look at my essay
Can someone plz look at my essay
I also change the thesis statement
there, i've corrected it
lol what you correct everything is the same as it was before
this website has to be remove because no body help here
no there were a few errors in spelling in the last paragraph
you know..no one wants to help if you dont listen and act politly
still need help