Feedback on My poem that I wrote about 2 friends let me know what you think.
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That was awsome
omg luv it
Nice job man! I really liked that:)
The only "critique" I would have is that some parts of the poem had a slightly more formal tone than others. So, you could alter the word choice a bit so that your tone is consistant throughout the poem (if that interests you at all.) However, I did like it and if you don't want to change it you definitely do not have to it's YOUR art! :)
OMG ! You are very talented. I Really felt everything you said. Your words are powerful & very meaningful. I hope you take this talent further than just a hobby. I write also but you deff' showed me up lol. Keep it up. You made me cry and that doesnt happen often :)