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Gorgeous, short and sweet :)
I think this is a very good haiku. With just those short simple words, it tells a whole story of how it's the end of fall, nearly winter. Good job!
And I agree with Babynini, it's short and sweet :)
You're welcome!! Do you still write haiku's or other poems? You're quite talented. Haiku's can be tricky because they need to be good, make sense, and then have the certain amount of syllables.
I haven't in a long time. I just never have time anymore. I have a cinquain that I wrote that sane year though. But it's not as good.
Oooh, post it here please, I'd like to see it!! You should try to write more when you have time! But I understand what it's like; I used to write poems all the time, but suddenly I haven't posted one in months because I'm so busy! XD
Are you sure? It's really bad and it's about turtles... haha
I love turtles haha And I'm sure it's fine :)
I'll post it in the comments. Is that good? Or should I close this and post it as a "question?"
Posting it here in the comments will be fine.
Turtles slow, curious crawling, rolling, hiding quiet, peaceful, meditative Turtles
It's so dumb... I know.
Could be better.
I was like 13 when I wrote it. haha
Do you have any constructive criticism for me?
I'm open for things that might help.
OKay, sorry I was gone. So, it's not that bad actually. I think it just needs to be reworded slightly, let me think about that.
And btw,age doesn't matter for writing I'm 13 XD started writing poems when I was 8
That's pretty good for your first time lol
you're welcome :) I think with some more practice, you can write some really good stuff!