anonymous
  • anonymous
I have a random Haiku for you that I wrote in like 7th or 8th grade. As the sun shines bright The last leaf falls to the ground Winter is coming Comments or thoughts?
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anonymous
  • anonymous
sik
anonymous
  • anonymous
? @supahotfire
Babynini
  • Babynini
Gorgeous, short and sweet :)

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anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you! <3 @Babynini
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
I think this is a very good haiku. With just those short simple words, it tells a whole story of how it's the end of fall, nearly winter. Good job!
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
And I agree with Babynini, it's short and sweet :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you!! @horsegirl27
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
You're welcome!! Do you still write haiku's or other poems? You're quite talented. Haiku's can be tricky because they need to be good, make sense, and then have the certain amount of syllables.
anonymous
  • anonymous
I haven't in a long time. I just never have time anymore. I have a cinquain that I wrote that sane year though. But it's not as good.
anonymous
  • anonymous
same**
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
Oooh, post it here please, I'd like to see it!! You should try to write more when you have time! But I understand what it's like; I used to write poems all the time, but suddenly I haven't posted one in months because I'm so busy! XD
anonymous
  • anonymous
Are you sure? It's really bad and it's about turtles... haha
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
I love turtles haha And I'm sure it's fine :)
anonymous
  • anonymous
I'll post it in the comments. Is that good? Or should I close this and post it as a "question?"
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
Posting it here in the comments will be fine.
anonymous
  • anonymous
Turtles slow, curious crawling, rolling, hiding quiet, peaceful, meditative Turtles
anonymous
  • anonymous
It's so dumb... I know.
TheRaggedyDoctor
  • TheRaggedyDoctor
Yeah..
TheRaggedyDoctor
  • TheRaggedyDoctor
Could be better.
anonymous
  • anonymous
I was like 13 when I wrote it. haha
anonymous
  • anonymous
Do you have any constructive criticism for me?
anonymous
  • anonymous
I'm open for things that might help.
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
OKay, sorry I was gone. So, it's not that bad actually. I think it just needs to be reworded slightly, let me think about that.
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
And btw,age doesn't matter for writing I'm 13 XD started writing poems when I was 8
anonymous
  • anonymous
haha @horsegirl27 yeah but some people are better than others and have had more practice. This was my first time ever writing anything.
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
That's pretty good for your first time lol
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thanks @horsegirl27
horsegirl27
  • horsegirl27
you're welcome :) I think with some more practice, you can write some really good stuff!
anonymous
  • anonymous
Thank you again. You're too kind. @horsegirl27

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