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anonymous

  • one year ago

I have a random Haiku for you that I wrote in like 7th or 8th grade. As the sun shines bright The last leaf falls to the ground Winter is coming Comments or thoughts?

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  1. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    sik

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    ? @supahotfire

  3. Babynini
    • one year ago
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    Gorgeous, short and sweet :)

  4. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Thank you! <3 @Babynini

  5. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    I think this is a very good haiku. With just those short simple words, it tells a whole story of how it's the end of fall, nearly winter. Good job!

  6. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    And I agree with Babynini, it's short and sweet :)

  7. anonymous
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    Thank you!! @horsegirl27

  8. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    You're welcome!! Do you still write haiku's or other poems? You're quite talented. Haiku's can be tricky because they need to be good, make sense, and then have the certain amount of syllables.

  9. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I haven't in a long time. I just never have time anymore. I have a cinquain that I wrote that sane year though. But it's not as good.

  10. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    same**

  11. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    Oooh, post it here please, I'd like to see it!! You should try to write more when you have time! But I understand what it's like; I used to write poems all the time, but suddenly I haven't posted one in months because I'm so busy! XD

  12. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Are you sure? It's really bad and it's about turtles... haha

  13. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    I love turtles haha And I'm sure it's fine :)

  14. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I'll post it in the comments. Is that good? Or should I close this and post it as a "question?"

  15. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    Posting it here in the comments will be fine.

  16. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Turtles slow, curious crawling, rolling, hiding quiet, peaceful, meditative Turtles

  17. anonymous
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    It's so dumb... I know.

  18. TheRaggedyDoctor
    • one year ago
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    Yeah..

  19. TheRaggedyDoctor
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    Could be better.

  20. anonymous
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    I was like 13 when I wrote it. haha

  21. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Do you have any constructive criticism for me?

  22. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I'm open for things that might help.

  23. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    OKay, sorry I was gone. So, it's not that bad actually. I think it just needs to be reworded slightly, let me think about that.

  24. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    And btw,age doesn't matter for writing I'm 13 XD started writing poems when I was 8

  25. anonymous
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    haha @horsegirl27 yeah but some people are better than others and have had more practice. This was my first time ever writing anything.

  26. horsegirl27
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    That's pretty good for your first time lol

  27. anonymous
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    Thanks @horsegirl27

  28. horsegirl27
    • one year ago
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    you're welcome :) I think with some more practice, you can write some really good stuff!

  29. anonymous
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    Thank you again. You're too kind. @horsegirl27

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