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@Babynini @Data_LG2 @iamabarbiegirl @jim_thompson5910 @KyanTheDoodle
Which one are you leaning towards? :)
If you're stuck, try reading it outloud! that helps sometimes.
hrm well not D because that has an unnecessary "she" in there.
I mean, it's in the wrong spot.
A is a little awkward too. Which out of B or C do you think it is? :)
hm. I'd go with C. You may want to have someone double check that though. It sounds best when it's read outloud, to me anyway.
Baby the Nini is right. When you're describing someone or something and take a break in the sentence, you must put a comma before and after. Also before any one of the words in FANBOYS. It's quite complicated that way.
thanks! i think i can do the rest on my own! i really appriciate it!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! You ruined the tenderness with your direct answer virus!
me? what did i do? @KyanTheDoodle @pooja195
Not you. Lolprincesslafter.
oh well i had already been helped so it didnt matter @KyanTheDoodle