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I need to change some stuff but I am confused about it so my teacher sent me this.
Be sure that in your paragraph, you only include solid evidence. Then, you must have at least one piece of evidence, including an internal citation, within your paragraph!
Please make sure you proofread to earn the full amount of points! You should always be using correct spelling, proper capitalization, punctuation, and grammar!
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Okay thanks. :)
Well, for one, I think you need to find evidence about the REASONS people feel book should be banned. You started doing that, but went on and talked about how people should judge a book for themselves. It looks liked you went back to the reasons in your later sentences.
Also, you need to provide at least one direct quote. I would advise that you find a quote related to people's reasons for banning books.
Finally, there are some minor grammatical errors in your paragraph. Those need to be fixed.
Thank you! :) But what was the words I need to correct?
If you mean grammatical errors, then
labeled INA certain way- space needed between capitalized words.
THEIR JUDGEMENT ON THE BOOK- I would change this to "THEIR OWN JUDGEMENTS ABOUT THE CONTENT OF THE BOOK."
or if that's too long or unrelated, just omit the sentence altogether.
There was a common places where they banned the books in schools, public libary, and book stores, but unlike some places the books that were banned was for the following reasons, racial issuses, inappropiate language or actions, or violence and negativty.-change to
Books are often banned in schools, libraries, and book stroes because they are innaprotpriate, contain violence, negativity, or racial issues.
Many books that have been banned are dropped from the banned list.- this sentence can be omitted.
Those books that was banned is done so because of the contents in the book.- can be changed to "Books are often banned because of their content."
You might want to combine "Books are often banned because of their content." and "Books are often banned in schools, libraries, and book stores because they are innaprotpriate, contain violence, negativity, or racial issues. "
Getting rid of "Books are often banned because of their content." would be ok too.
Thank you so much! :)
So where do I put the quote now??
Anywhere, the quote just has to say something about the feelings of people concerning banned books.