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WILL MEDAL AND FAN BEST ANSWERS I'm not so good at English so please don't judge me.

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  1. anonymous
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    Fix the following sentences: 1) I surprise my freind because I buyed for my freind blu: dress 2) Abraham lincoln, who was the 16th president of the us, who was born in kentucky. 3) I was sad because my mom didnot pick me up for school; today so I had to walk home in the pouring rain 4) I spied on my sister she plans murder my neighbor so i call cops. 5) He said I did good jub in my test 5 year ago i remember. 6) I run more faster than a eagle flies!!! 7) Can you beleive my mom is president Obama's sister so he is my uncle, see! 8) do you now the answer, i asked, she said no, so I got real mad as a taecher 9) my dad is a docter? 10) she is more good than i am at soccor but its my best sport. HELP ME ASAP PLEASE!!!

  2. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    @XxMuslimxX

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    someone! Anyone! pleaze

  4. XxMuslimxX
    • one year ago
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    Sure thing. I can help.

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    THX SO MYCH

  6. XxMuslimxX
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    1) I surprised my friend when I bought her a blue dress!

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Can you explain how you got that?

  8. XxMuslimxX
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    Um...sure?

  9. XxMuslimxX
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    1. Surprise is present tense, you are speaking about the past because later on in the sentence you said 'buyed' The sentence is now: I surprised my freind because I buyed for my freind blu: dress 2. This sentence contains a plural spelling error: 'buyed' is expected to be the past sense of buy but the correct past sense of buy is bought. The sentence is now: I surprised my freind because I bought for my freind blu: dress 3. Friend is also misspelled. You should switch around the 'ei' so it is 'ie' in the word 'friends. The sentence is now: I surprised my friend because I bought for my friend blu: dress 4. You are talking about the color blue, so note that it is spelled with an 'e' at the end. The sentence is now: I surprised my friend because I bought for my friend blue: dress 5. Now, you do not need a colon between blue and dress because a colon is used to indicate that a writer is introducing a quotation or a list of items, etc. The sentence is now: I surprised my friend because I bought for my friend blue dress 6. You are talking about ONE (single) dress so you should say 'a (blue) dress' The sentence is now: I surprised my friend because I bought for my friend a blue dress 7. Now we need to know whether this friend is a he or a she because we can't call this friend, 'my friend' throughout the sentence. The sentence is now: I surprised my friend because I bought for her a blue dress 8. Since because replaces since, we will replace because with WHEN (I told you why in the PM) The sentence is now: I surprised my friend when I bought for her a blue dress 9. We no longer need the word 'for' in there since 'her' says it all. The sentence is now: I surprised my friend when I bought her a blue dress 10. Now, we need to add punctuation at the end. In this case we will use a exclamation point, '!'. The sentence is now: I surprised my friend when I bought her a blue dress!

  10. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    Thank you!!!

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