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Shirley27

  • one year ago

Please help look over the first body paragraph of this essay. Thanks!

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  1. Shirley27
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    I like the body paragraph a lot. The last sentence feels a tad bit out of place mostly due just to the way it's worded. Try and possibly re-word that if you can at all. It sounds to choppy.

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    Thank you so much!!! @jonnyshaw10

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