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teresar7

  • one year ago

im writing a new song now.... Its called "dont need you anymore" feedback plz..

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  1. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    I have so many feelings I’m feeling so confused heart broken, unstoppable crying i thought i really knew you you told me that you loved me i know now that it’s a lie i’m going on without you it’s time to say goodbye no more pain, and no more lies you broke my heart too many times now i can see what i couldn’t before i’m better off now, don’t need you anymore. you left me there alone crying in the rain bleeding deep inside do you feel the pain? no, of course you don’t you’ll never understand to be hurt by the girl you loved what it’s like to be the man no more pain, and no more lies you broke my heart too many times now i can see what i couldn’t before i’m better off now, don’t need you anymore i should of known better than to give away my heart

  2. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    i am not done yet tho...

  3. teresar7
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    @puppylove<3123 @puppylover0617 @puppylover52

  4. CallMeKiki
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    Wow, Teresa! It's amazing. I'm speechless. :O

  5. anonymous
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    boring and stupid.

  6. anonymous
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    i think its good don't pay atention to Jonrooks he is just being mean

  7. teresar7
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    thanks guys

  8. puppylover0617
    • one year ago
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    wow that's just like always

  9. anonymous
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    well id need a tune to read it to

  10. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    lol ya!

  11. anonymous
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    i like that im working on an album called rules of atractions

  12. anonymous
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    This is really amazing. (:

  13. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    thx guys

  14. mm3591
    • one year ago
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    This is better than most of my songs!

  15. teresar7
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    thank you

  16. anonymous
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    i love it

  17. jeffyblood
    • one year ago
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    Wow I love it!!! You are really good!!! Keep up the good work!!!! :)

  18. teresar7
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    thank you! its my 13th song

  19. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    That would be an amazing lyrical song to dance to.

  20. Owlcoffee
    • one year ago
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    You might want to indicate, at the very least the chord progression, the rythm or a sheet version so people can hear what you imagined the song to be, else, this would be but lyrics and work better as a poem rather than a song, thus, not belonging in this section.

  21. DevoLove
    • one year ago
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    To be honest this is just like me i think of all these same things everyday. This is amazing. I love it. Thanks. <3

  22. anonymous
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    This song is awesome, It has a lot of raw emotion which is great!

  23. anonymous
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    I agree with a lotta you it was a very well put song :D

  24. teresar7
    • one year ago
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    thank you! music is just everything to me so i write. i have the beat and everything to the song, i just haven't recorded it yet. thats what im going to work on.

  25. anonymous
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    r u just a song writer or composer too?@teresar7

  26. anonymous
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    what if...it was screamed 0-0

  27. teresar7
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    its not screamo lol yes i write songs and i sing them.

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