Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Can someone please help me with a thesis and creating an outline? I will metal and fan! Thank you
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misssunshinexxoxo
  • misssunshinexxoxo
Very great; no mistakes and good punctuation. :)
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Which one??
anonymous
  • anonymous
wait what do u need help on?

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Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Creating a thesis and outline
anonymous
  • anonymous
I believe that you should use the second one although better punctuation is needed
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Okay.. What about an outline?
anonymous
  • anonymous
ok do u need the setup?
Kash_TheSmartGuy
  • Kash_TheSmartGuy
That is a very long sentence. Divide it into smaller sentences.
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
I thought a thesis statement is suppose to be one sentence?
Kash_TheSmartGuy
  • Kash_TheSmartGuy
Yes but not that long. Make it concise
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Which one though?
Kash_TheSmartGuy
  • Kash_TheSmartGuy
Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the people camping can see unique and beautiful sights, I like camping in the woods, but I love vacationing at a resort because and resorts have a.c./heat, comfy beds, showers, in door toilet with door and lock, sometimes spa's, room service or restaurants, maids and security, people, pools or hot tubs, soda/ice machines, elevators, no bugs.
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Alright.. Um should I remove words?
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the people camping can see unique and beautiful sights --> Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the campers can see unique and beautiful sights,
Kash_TheSmartGuy
  • Kash_TheSmartGuy
Yup, good idea. BTW ^^ good!
Kash_TheSmartGuy
  • Kash_TheSmartGuy
Did I help?
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
So far yes.. I still need an outline
Kash_TheSmartGuy
  • Kash_TheSmartGuy
So, like an argumentative essay or what kind of essay outline?
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Im contrasting "Camping in the deep woods/wild to vacationing at a resort." I like camping in the woods but vacationing at a resort is more me
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
@Kash_TheSmartGuy ??
Kash_TheSmartGuy
  • Kash_TheSmartGuy
Sorry
Destinyyyy
  • Destinyyyy
Its okay.

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