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Very great; no mistakes and good punctuation. :)
wait what do u need help on?
Creating a thesis and outline
I believe that you should use the second one although better punctuation is needed
Okay.. What about an outline?
ok do u need the setup?
That is a very long sentence. Divide it into smaller sentences.
I thought a thesis statement is suppose to be one sentence?
Yes but not that long. Make it concise
Which one though?
Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the people camping can see unique and beautiful sights, I like camping in the woods, but I love vacationing at a resort because and resorts have a.c./heat, comfy beds, showers, in door toilet with door and lock, sometimes spa's, room service or restaurants, maids and security, people, pools or hot tubs, soda/ice machines, elevators, no bugs.
Alright.. Um should I remove words?
Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the people camping can see unique and beautiful sights --> Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the campers can see unique and beautiful sights,
Yup, good idea. BTW ^^ good!
Did I help?
So far yes.. I still need an outline
So, like an argumentative essay or what kind of essay outline?
Im contrasting "Camping in the deep woods/wild to vacationing at a resort." I like camping in the woods but vacationing at a resort is more me