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Destinyyyy

  • one year ago

Can someone please help me with a thesis and creating an outline? I will metal and fan! Thank you

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  1. misssunshinexxoxo
    • one year ago
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    Very great; no mistakes and good punctuation. :)

  2. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Which one??

  3. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    wait what do u need help on?

  4. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Creating a thesis and outline

  5. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    I believe that you should use the second one although better punctuation is needed

  6. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Okay.. What about an outline?

  7. anonymous
    • one year ago
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    ok do u need the setup?

  8. Kash_TheSmartGuy
    • one year ago
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    That is a very long sentence. Divide it into smaller sentences.

  9. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    I thought a thesis statement is suppose to be one sentence?

  10. Kash_TheSmartGuy
    • one year ago
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    Yes but not that long. Make it concise

  11. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Which one though?

  12. Kash_TheSmartGuy
    • one year ago
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    Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the people camping can see unique and beautiful sights, I like camping in the woods, but I love vacationing at a resort because and resorts have a.c./heat, comfy beds, showers, in door toilet with door and lock, sometimes spa's, room service or restaurants, maids and security, people, pools or hot tubs, soda/ice machines, elevators, no bugs.

  13. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Alright.. Um should I remove words?

  14. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the people camping can see unique and beautiful sights --> Even though camping in the wood or wild can be an adventure and the campers can see unique and beautiful sights,

  15. Kash_TheSmartGuy
    • one year ago
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    Yup, good idea. BTW ^^ good!

  16. Kash_TheSmartGuy
    • one year ago
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    Did I help?

  17. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    So far yes.. I still need an outline

  18. Kash_TheSmartGuy
    • one year ago
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    So, like an argumentative essay or what kind of essay outline?

  19. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Im contrasting "Camping in the deep woods/wild to vacationing at a resort." I like camping in the woods but vacationing at a resort is more me

  20. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    @Kash_TheSmartGuy ??

  21. Kash_TheSmartGuy
    • one year ago
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    Sorry

  22. Destinyyyy
    • one year ago
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    Its okay.

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